Reviews for Destined to Fall
Chimichanga-chan chapter 2 . 8/14/2005
wo0t another great chapter. i cant wait for the next one! be quick, cause i cant stand it when writers take a year to post there chapters! :P

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MandaSammi chapter 2 . 8/14/2005
Aw, poor Luke. Where is he going? What does he have to do? Update Soon!
Still Running chapter 2 . 8/13/2005
Nice progression. There was some great angst in this chapter and it ended with a good sense of tension. You have a way of writing Luke so that the reader can identify with him. Beautifully written. Update soon.
Chimichanga-chan chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
sad, but very very well written, its a very good AU.
MandaSammi chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Oh, this is cool! Continue, please! Update soon!
Stelmaria chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Why, this story is perfect... if I do say so myself. (Which I do.) "I reach the edge of the post, I can go no further without falling into an endless abyss." I love that sentence. *sighs* How wonderfully perfectly amazingly beautifully written. Please continue.
Still Running chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
Wow. Nice start. Update Soon.
ga ga fu chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
Aww..Luke died;_; How sad...Very beuatifully written! You have a good talent at grasping the emotional point of the characters. Bravo, bravo!*claps*_
WizardWriter86 chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
oh, this is a good start. I like how you put the battle in Luke perspective. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Update soon.
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