|Reviews for Broken Mind, Fractured Soul|
| Amahami chapter 53 . 2/25
The only things that bugged me about this fic were that you always spelled dying as dieing, and the insane amount of nicknames. But other than that...amazing fic. 3 It'd making a fantastic book if some things were changed. :D I totally ship Severus and Remus, though. In this, anyways.
| Amahami chapter 52 . 2/25
Wow. Just...wow. I held my breath most of the chapter and ...I am at a loss for words. This is so amazing, and while you may never read this, I just hope you know how amazing this fic is. I know there's one more chapter, but damn. SLDFJSLKFJSLK I love how Dumbledick died and stuff...and Draco. Ah. 3 Thank you so much for writing this. 3
| lil chapter 20 . 2/23
1 for the recommendation of Saving Connor, I read it and it's truly a good story! As for this one, I'm amazed of how you could write something as complicated (for me) as the MPD. You're really doing a good job, and I'm glad that Harry misses Severus. If only Sylas could forgive and trust him...
| lil chapter 16 . 2/23
Go Sev! Show the old manipulator what you can do!
| Amahami chapter 48 . 2/22
I read tonight anyways. I liked this chapter, but Harry never put his piano back on his necklace... buy otherwise i loved the episode. ...chapter. now i really must rest. i must be up in 5.5 hours. Thank you so much for writing this! 3
| Amahami chapter 47 . 2/22
holy shit man! woah. fantastic chapter! at first it was okay, then the thing in the hospital ward...yes! it was great! my emotions are tugging at my very being, from Shadow opening up to Draco. oh and 'slythindor' is a fuck yes. too bad i need to be up in 6 hours, or i'd read more... 3
| Amahami chapter 46 . 2/21
This chapter was a bit confusing in places, but overall it was pretty good. I am pretty sure Silverwood will turn on Harry though. ) :
| Amahami chapter 45 . 2/20
Okay, so my mum recommended this fanfic to me a few months ago. She reads it on her phone, with DocstoGo. So she sent it to me and I finally began reading it. It keeps draining my battery, though, so I'm now reading it on here. I love this fic so much and I'm so invested in it and ahhh! After reading it for two days, I was telling all of my friends the basics of it during lunch. My friend Aaliyah wanted to read it so I got her the info so she could read it. She finished it in two days (I've been reading this for five days). She told me there's a sequel and that makes me sooo happy. This fic is phenomenal and it's really helping me. I have a huge amount of mentall illnesses, the main of which being depression and anxiety. I am also struggling with self-harm, and this fic is really helping me. Thank you for writing this and just...agh. Thank you so much for everything. I will review every chapter from here on out, unless I read it on my phone for some reason. ( :
| Guest chapter 53 . 2/20
You are one hell of a writer, you know that. I love your harry potter version than the original.
| AbsoluteReader1995 chapter 27 . 2/18
K so u didn't explain this in the next chapter, i checked, so I'm goin to ask. when neville opened his present from harry he also thanked gabriel and silas, i was wondering why sirius didn't notice that.
| HollyKalina23 chapter 1 . 2/17
Yes! I found this story again! I've been looking for this story for weeks! YAAAAAY! :)
| SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 2/12
| kitsuneko1976 chapter 12 . 2/7
uh, question? is the conviction a spot where you veer from canon? If so, then that really makes sense, but if not, then that leaves a minor potential plot hole with the money and more importantly the godfather status could prolly be easily enough overturned, leaving snape room to wriggle into harry's guardianship. And the deeding and such seems handwaved away because of the almighty goblins not blocking his fundage and whatnot as he was apparently never actually convicted. Assumption is the mother of all...well, i'm sure you know the old adage. ah well, we'll see where it goes. (been years since i first read this) just kinda curious.
Love this story. Truly epic.
| KneazleGriff chapter 1 . 2/4
Wow. Great concept! ;)
| MistyLuck chapter 53 . 1/11
Oh my goodness! This is probably one of the best stories I've ever read on fanfiction, and I have read a ton. I think you did a wonderful job of portraying what it would be like for someone with Multiple Personality Disorder as well as many of the struggles that would be faced for recovery. Furthermore, I love the plot twists involved and how everything is fluid, just like real life. The fact that the merpeople were attacking for something that had happened a year ago and pretty much everyone had already forgotten about was a rather brilliant move, because it gave them an actual motive rather than a previously unknown, un-foreshadowed reason that would have been ridiculous and hellish to explain and, therefore, understand. I'm already looking forward to the sequal, so I'll just get to that right now.