Reviews for Broken Mind, Fractured Soul
Guest chapter 31 . 5/23/2017
when u abbreviate the title to BMFS i just think big mother f*ck*ng salad. cool story though man, good job.
ScarletNight chapter 16 . 5/23/2017
I'd like to say I'm surprised but that would be a lie dumbledore always was a control freak add him together with a inventive Fanfic writer and you get a war hardened fool who doesn't understand people and honestly doesn't care too
BlueRowley chapter 5 . 5/11/2017
This is the most bizarre, complicated fanfic I've ever read! It's so addicting I have to keep reading. Will Harry ever become one again? How will Severus react when he learns how each personality/self was created? This is so unique and fresh. Great job.
Birdy1020 chapter 48 . 5/8/2017
okay this has been bugging me the whole story. Ron and Hermione are so OOC. you follow the story line but you potray them as some if the worst friends in the world and I know some people see them that way but it is just not true. Ron cares very deeply about Harry. Ron offered Harry his sandwhich when it was the only thing he had. Ron sacrificed himself without a second thought so his friends could go on. Ron stood on a broken leg to tell a infamous mass murderer that is he wanted to kill Harry he would have to go through him first. Ron gave Dobby his own clothes and socks for him to be buried in because he knew how much it would've meant to Dobby. Hermione Granger trusts authority and believes in following the rules yet broke every single one of them twice for Harry. She set Snape on fire to help Harry. In fith year she stayed up to make essence of murtlap for Harry and waited up for him every night for him to return from detention with Umbridge. Hermione made a potion way above her year from stolen ingredients to help Harry prove a haunch that she didn't fully agree with. Hermione went to the Ministry with Harry. She continually fought for elf freedom which she believed was right even when everyone laughed at her for it. Fought with Harry through every battle and stayed his friend no matter the danger it brought her in. You have taken their flaws and mistakes in their friendship, seemingly to ignore the fact that Harry isn't that great of friend to them either, and multiplied it by a thousand.
Birdy1020 chapter 47 . 5/8/2017
ahhhh, so many emotions. For me the merges of Rose and Kit were easy and I felt good about them but the merges of Gabriel and Silas are harder to handle emotionally. Which this shows how talented of a writer you are to get us so attached that even though they aren't gone to still feel loss
Birdy1020 chapter 33 . 5/3/2017
it kind of just it me that if Gabe and Silas weren't the same person I would totally ship them together, but they are so I don't...but I wants to.
Birdy1020 chapter 4 . 5/1/2017
I really don't like being that person but multiple personality disorder is now call dissociative identity disorder
ZianaSue chapter 2 . 4/26/2017
oh...split personalities.
LothithilShade chapter 2 . 4/22/2017
It is kind of confusing... But I like it!... I just think you need to have something happen, to merge these personalities together please!
Ladiefury chapter 16 . 4/16/2017
I hate Dumbledore. Just hate him so much.
Ladiefury chapter 7 . 4/15/2017
I really just want to do that thing where I read and don't acknowledge my feelings on each chapter, but I honestly cannot do that to you. This is so perfectly researched and well thought out. It is unlike anything I've ever read. Just thank you.
Ladiefury chapter 4 . 4/15/2017
I just cannot say enough about how much I'm loving this.
Ladiefury chapter 3 . 4/15/2017
Jesus.. this chapter might have broken me
Ladiefury chapter 2 . 4/15/2017
I love the way each personality takes on a role so needed to be filled. I love that there is a sort of ring leader keeping it all together. This is such an amazing idea,
Ladiefury chapter 1 . 4/15/2017
Well I feel like my heart has been ripped out of my chest, so I may as well continue. This first chapter is very brilliantly written. While painful for me to read, it really sucked me in and captured my immediate attention.
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