Reviews for Broken Mind, Fractured Soul
Jedi-Bant chapter 52 . 5/31/2016
This is one of the best written fics i have ever had the pleasure of reading. It was so well thought out and the writing was perfect, i could hardly put it down. I love the interplay between the different alters, how they were so different from each other but at the same time you could see how they fit into the personality of the Harry in the books, so often fic change his personality it fit their story and you haven't which makes it all the more engaging. You also kept me on my toes at times i was wondering if Crouch Jr had become Moody or was his father instead and i so didn't see the merge between Harry and Silas coming so soon!

Amazing all round 10 stars. Will definitely be adding to my list of fics to reread when i can't find anything new. Well done!
SkyeMoor chapter 36 . 5/25/2016
I would pay you to make Harry's final form a chimera.
SkyeMoor chapter 30 . 5/25/2016
Ha. Severus does know how to counsel (and administer therapy to) Silas.
And I LOLed at Gabriel's expression!
SkyeMoor chapter 26 . 5/25/2016
Silas is fun - and it takes a certain sort of bravery to present your innocence to the world on a plate, to be consumed and eaten.
SkyeMoor chapter 25 . 5/25/2016
Ha. would be fun if Sirius was to figure out about the letters to his cousin.
Entertainment lover chapter 53 . 5/23/2016
I have all read the chapters. They are amazing. I hate dumbledore. I am glad Voldemort and dumbledore are dead.
SkyeMoor chapter 16 . 5/23/2016
A bit too much putting all the pieces together at once.
pezlover chapter 1 . 5/13/2016
This was an amazing story. I have read all the parts and truly enjoyed them. I liked them so much I have been using the name Shadow as a game ID.

Something that stood out for me was the name change from Harry to Shadow. I have read many stories that had a name change but it always felt at least a little forced. This is not the case in your story. I had absolutely no problem switching to Shadow. It felt real and natural. Kudos to you for creating a solid back story and history to support the change. These were very good fics. Thank you so much.
SkyeMoor chapter 12 . 5/13/2016
wow,that got dark in a hurry.
Guest chapter 53 . 4/21/2016
OMG, such a tease.

Typo: thick tomb
*tome
Guest chapter 52 . 4/21/2016
Ahhhhh... Awesome story.

Typos

in danger of dieing
*dying

prepared to apperate.
*apparate

This had effected him,
*affected

His mind was still and intact.
*His mind was still intact.

had come from the horrific experienced relatively whole.
*had come through the horrific experience relatively whole.
Guest chapter 51 . 4/21/2016
Gah! Cliffie!

Typos

he wasn't aloud in the Great Hall.
*allowed

old ivory-covered house.
*ivy

he grit his teeth
*gritted

call in the Calvary

*calvary (not capitalized)

Shot first

*Shoot

Harry grit his teeth.

*gritted

burnt really bad, her wand was chard.

*badly

*charred

gage the damage.

*gauge

worse for ware

*wear
Guest chapter 50 . 4/21/2016
This story is amazing.

Typos

She had to as me to the ball!
*ask

There is good things in you
*are good

Neville and Ginny make a real cute couple.
*really

I know you didn't mean too.
*to

He'd take me to meetings, and he teach me magic.
*he'd teach

under the Imperio Curse
*Imperious

You're letters
*Your

her husband, and son were to by my new family.
*to be

I panic and left behind
*panicked

Now I now
*Now I know
Guest chapter 49 . 4/21/2016
Only one typo! Excellent!

going passed the stile
*past
Guest chapter 48 . 4/21/2016
Typos

What am I suppose to do?
*supposed

You're name only came out
*Your

sooth the child
*soothe

Whenever he is needed, he was always so damn fragile.
*was needed
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