Reviews for Broken Mind, Fractured Soul
I know okay chapter 3 . 10/24/2018
Poor Harry. It's not like he needed more abuse on top of abuse. Funnily enough Silas is my favorite Harry.
I know okay chapter 2 . 10/23/2018
That has to be confusing to have chunks of memory missing.
I know okay chapter 1 . 10/22/2018
How awful for Harry.
Guest chapter 9 . 10/19/2018
And this is one of the many reasons i hated canon Lupin, he spent months teaching Harry a fairly intimate skill and never seemed to pick up (or rather seem to care) that Harry had so few happy memories. There were giant signs that Harry was neglected and the man did nothing. He is awful to the extrme (personally the breaking point for me was when he accused Harry of not caring that his mother was murdered in front of him when he witnessed the affects of the dementors on Harry first hand) so i like your description and character better. This is the Lupin that should have existed and then I could see why other people like him. Though i do notice that he contunues to lie about knowing James
Guest chapter 8 . 10/19/2018
I'm really like the start if this. You describe the alters well and give each solid foundation for each one existing. Snape, of course, is rather OCC as he does not possess this level of patience in canon but i love the relationship you have built. To be honest, i've come across this story many times but have always stayed away from it because of Remus' role. I actually hate Remus and feel he treats Harry fairly terribly and yet he is constantly forgiven for his treatment, mostly because people tend to excuse all behavior due to being a werewolf that has been discriminated against. I hope to see a nice evolution though and would prefer the primary focus to be on snape and hopefully some sirius who has faults but ultimately cares about Harry deeply (unlike Remus quite honrstly who abandons him at every single opportunity he has). Anyway regardless of my personal preferences you are a great writer.
TwistingHope chapter 54 . 10/2/2018
Wow. Holy motherfucking shit.

Let's just say… you made me interested in a type of condition that I certainly heard of but wasn't the least bit interested in. Oh and also…I thought that having MPD made you this close to insane. I know better now. Thanks :)
TwistingHope chapter 33 . 9/29/2018
Oh no! :( Besides Harry, I really, really loved Gabriel. I'll miss him a lot! :'((
MsShadowsOra chapter 1 . 9/27/2018
I didn't expect D.I.D to get involved in this story
TwistingHope chapter 15 . 9/26/2018
Aww. I'll miss Silas and Gabriel :(
azerty29 chapter 23 . 8/13/2018
Oh and also TWCUTTING is discussed and done on multiple occasions
azerty29 chapter 12 . 8/11/2018
You know, trigger warnings were made for a reason. So for anyone who is not there yetTW SUICIDE IN CHAPTER 12. I understand not wanting to spoil the story, but if I had been in a bad day, this would really have triggered me. It's already bad enough. So no, I'm not thanking you for that. Seriously. Flag your works
amarilis chapter 54 . 8/2/2018
Amazing sroty! Just came accross it and couldn't put it down . . .
Movig on to the sequels now.
DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 54 . 7/19/2018
the name "the road not taken" just reminds me of supernatural
DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 27 . 7/17/2018
OMG I'm crying. sev is so sweet. the ring especially
DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 12 . 7/15/2018
there best not be no Cho Chang action happening. I kinda hate her. Charry is a horrible pairing.
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