Reviews for The End and Beginning of Civilization |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just can't get enough of your stories. Clear is one of my all time favorites stories on here, and I'm not even a K&R shipper. You've done it again with this story. It was just amazing all the way through. Kudos on a job well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm pretty sure the people in cities would die out before the people in more rural areas. Cities depend on gas to have food trucked in. People in rural areas have enough land they would have a chance at becoming self sufficient on food crops right where they live. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK this was one of the best kp five I have seen in years. Loved this. It was amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story and basic premise: worked out pretty well. :) You thought about doing a sequel or a 'redux' version of this story, now that it's been five years down the line? ~ Mike. |
![]() ![]() ![]() From the very first paragraphs, I know I will enjoy this story. I agree fullheartedly that you American's are wasting your oil. You drive everywhere and pollute the environment. But, that is not the point the point is highlighting a important social issue in a story based on the regular end of the world scenario. Unless one can assume that the beginning of civilization alluded to by the title represents a rebirth of society dedicated to the pursuit and advancement of knowledge and protection of the environment. Overall i suspect this will be a good read. I congratulate you for your idea, I like that Mr. Dr. Possible and Wade are looking for energy solutions considering that is my major. Bioprocess Engineering and Reneawable Fuel Technology. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, i enjoyed it much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great wrap-up. Pretty plausible that Kim could pull it off. Hope you'll be writing more adventures of the Stoppables. Your take on K&R as young marrieds is ever fascinating |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yea! Nice job, friend! I look forward to more in the future. THANKS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome ending! any epilogue? kids? anything? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chappie! Kim gets shot! war heating up! more, please! THANKS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I liked how Kim and Ron both acted in-character at the court house. Good for Kim for standing up for Ron! And the poor newlyweds. A dirty bomb will seem like child's play to the tweebs. But something tells me that K&R may well have the last laugh ... Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that was a good chapter. Kim and Ron gets a taste of the reality of the war, and the story ends with Kim and Ron's prom night ruined when they wanted to make love to each other. Having the Tweeb stay in their apartment is ideal suited to keep Kim and Ron on their toes. ;) I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() man great chapter very good cliff hanger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter. Nice action, nice relationship stuff. Tweebs living with the newlyweds-the honeymoon is truly over now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good stuff! nice cliffie. THANKS! |