I wrote the previous review...but have now finished this story...and what a fabulously clever, funny, and fun-filled story it was! So enjoyed this! Thank you soooo much.
Now, to the sequel!

This little Lizzie is fabulous so far. I keep picturing Margaret O'Brien as in the movie Meet Me In St. Louis. Your Lizzie is just as precocious.

Oh, and...middle school? Really? This writing is amazing. The banter is incredible...its always my favorite part of Austen and similar authors, and yours is superb...and also hilarious!

I'll keep reading! Thank you!

How onery!

What fun!

Oh my word! What fun! Lizzy is brilliant!

Oh boy, that was an excellent " first meeting "!

Crazy. So funny. LOL

Hilarious

The writing has improved greatly from the start to this point

I love being able to read this story by the child and the sequel by the adult version of you. Thank you

I am absolutely flabbergasted that you wrote this in middle school. I first read it about three years ago and had it filed away as one of the more complex and adult pieces. Very much looking forward to rereading and getting to the sequel!

Beautiful tale!

I am awed that hou couldwrite so welli. Middle school. I look forward to reading the successor.

For someone in middle school to have written this is astounding! its so good that I have read it every 6-9 months since published and never get tired of it. Thanks so much for sharing your story with the community... it's greatly appreciated!

Yay! Glad you are back!