Reviews for lost without you
santa crux chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
This is a very romantic story. It has a lyrical flow to it with many lovely images. The characters both old and new are believable. Thanks for keeping TOTSS alive in your story.
IshTara chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
The things we put our favourite characters through... But we always save them in the end! ;D

You do have an intriguing story here, but you really should find a beta-reader. Your grammar is absolutely atrocious! I almost stopped reading several times and skipped down whole pages, to get to the ending sooner. That just doesn't do a story justice and with some help I think you could do a lot better.

Good luck!