|Reviews for Marriage of Convenience|
| Just some reader chapter 22 . 6/3
I know you are probably like no where near this story, but I Just really felt the need to leave a review. I am liking the story so far and everything (even though sesshomaru is like super ooc and a playboy) but this chapter made me a little angry. He made her look like a whore and had someone DESTROY a car she bought with her hard earned money and she just forgives him. Just like that. Kagome doesn't seem like the type of person to Just roll over and be like "sorry I embarresed you I won't do it again." After these last few chapters I find I actually hate sesshomaru. Like a lot. So basically what I'm trying to say is, good job. It takes a writer of amazing talent to make a reader feel true emotions towards a character. Definetly a good story, can't wait to see how sesshomaru matures or changes (if he even does.)
P.S. Rin is completely adorable
| Undertheskys chapter 51 . 2/11
Story was okay. The beginning made me so angry at Sesshomaru and sad for Kagome but as i read it started to change. Overall the book was okay for me. I dont think I'll be reading the sequel anytime soon because I like the way this ended and the sequel was never completed
| Undertheskys chapter 42 . 2/11
Sesshomaru is very lucky to havea wife like Kagome, shes is an angel.
| Undertheskys chapter 41 . 2/11
Well at least now we know he wants to make her happy
| Undertheskys chapter 16 . 2/11
What a dick, how could he do that to her, honestly
| Undertheskys chapter 6 . 2/10
Wow Sesshomaru is an arrogant asshole
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
Hey, are you also on wattpad with the username "xdatenshix"? If not then somebody's totally ripped your story off.
| Guest chapter 38 . 10/4/2015
...i dont think i can do this anymore..i cant. This fanfic is sooooo wierd! I could list all the things wrong with it but its late and im bored.
| Nyght elf chapter 32 . 10/4/2015
hm i will just skip to the last chapter, it started so good but now its just ugly. kagome is a weakling sesshoumaru a deranged horny dumbass, i quit. the idea was good but...anyway good luck with everything.
| viha chapter 36 . 9/26/2015
Oh my god what are you doing!.The
Story started good but now its going
from bad to worse.I mean showing kagome
as some weak willed,withhout backbone
(& even allowing herself to get slapped
without retaliation )was not good
enough that you keep on showing
seshoumaru getting more & more of a scheming like he has
switched roles with only
around 15 chapters left i have started
doubting if its really a story of seshKag
| viha chapter 22 . 9/26/2015
This particular chapter was too
much ooc I mean seshoumaru making someone look like a whore was
just too much for his honour
N kagome do u really see her the
crying type.I mean even if she is
emotional but she wont let someone get
away with purposely spiting her.
Atleast she would have first shouted
at him or thrown food or something
(n then cry) N she let it slide with just
a random apology.i mean common
we r talking about KAGOME here
| Hollydeamon chapter 21 . 12/17/2014
He is crule
| Hollydeamon chapter 17 . 12/17/2014
What a gerk!
| Hollydeamon chapter 16 . 12/16/2014
Hey! Nice chapter but, it is not a debut card, but a debit card. Hope you don't mind the correction.
| Lizzy Lightning chapter 52 . 10/23/2014
Loved the story. I thought it was great. I liked the coldness of Fluffy as he became somewhat warm and sweet to Kags. I think it was great and I cant wait to read the sequel!:P