Reviews for A Better Man |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The only question I have after reading all of this is when Petunia joined her husband into the light. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A couple of typo's, "#4 privet Drive", should be "#4 Privet Drive" AND "purely muggle", should be "purely Muggle". Nice chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A few typo's, "you never spent a dime", should be "you never spent a penny", "red hair and gren eyes", should be "red hair and green eyes" AND "Perhaos he should", should be "Perhaps he should". Interesting start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Real Genius reference |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the best fanfics I’ve ever read |
![]() ![]() omg this is genuinly one of the best fanfics ive read |
![]() ![]() VERNON TEACHES MUGGLE STUDIES |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is Harry only six months old if Dudley's a year and a half already? In HBP, it's stated that Harry is a month younger than Dudley... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I visited for a week with family stationed there. Enjoyed it. Had a ceilidh at the castle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fan fiction! |
![]() ![]() Chapter 3 doesn't work |
![]() ![]() A great start |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really intrigued by the conflict between Vincent Crabbe and Gregory Goyle. |
![]() ![]() I dont usually review these but this is definitly one of the best that i have read...very interesting and hard to put down. |