Reviews for A Better Man |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, Dobby! And aww, love when Petunia asks if she should put a blanket on Errol. So cute! Ginny having dreams of canon is intriguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though it’s speeding through time, it’s fun to read! I especially like the humour. And Hagrid as Father Christmas. Sounds like a magical holiday! Whoa! He apologized?! How did he know he would hurt him…or is that because he knows his mom performed a charm protecting him from evil Voldemort’s touch? Interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuzzyfather, aww! That’s adorable! Harry is the sweetest! Love all the hugs and Grampa Albus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let’s just assume Dumbledore directed the muggles attention away from the magic/Death Eater Peter, I like this outcome for the traitor way better than canon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is like nothing I have ever read before and I love it already! A changed Vernon, I never even considered that but it works so well. I like how they are a loving family already. Looking forward to how this progresses. |
![]() ![]() Chapters too short, too many reviews, just get on with the story for goodness sake ,! |
![]() ![]() Will this Harry be like one of the top students in the class or is he average as in the canin? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it’s Wormtail. Cause only Marauders and Harry called Sirius Padfoot and James wouldn’t do that, Remus is still alive and so is Harry. Therefore it is probably Wormtail. Plus he’s a ghost. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for a great (re)read! Very nicely done. |
![]() ![]() Your grammar sucks. That's too bad cause there's not many good! Dursley stories out there. See ya |
![]() ![]() ohhhh mmyyy god! that was soo good! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah this was so so sweet. Thank you for writing and I how the best for your future |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been loving the story so far but I can't say I enjoy the way you made being homosexual sound... strange. Because it's normal |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last response was quite useful thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Buena historia me gusta muchísimo |