|Reviews for Bleak|
| Kiwi-Starfruit chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
this was an absolutely beautiful story :) loved every bit of it.
| FrozenFragile chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Ah dang it, and I'd sworn to myself I'd quit crying through all the Aurikku fics. ;_;
| AlFlowerrise chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
Extraordinary beautiful. Words cannot fulfill the beauty in it, they cannot.
| Celwen chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I was looking for a good stories among the Aurikku ones, my newest addiction, and I found yours. It's wonderful, so well ritten, so sad and intense and hot and tender and so many other things. Thanks a lot for giving us such a good peace of work.
| ikutoominx chapter 2 . 1/16/2011
omg you are just so amazing! I was reading a story called a mile more by cheerie mai, and in her introduction she reccomended that we read your story and it is just soooo amazing! you and cheeries story are the best fics ive EVER read! your just so amazing (:
Oh p.s this story mades me cry *pouts*
Thank you both for making my day
| JingYee chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
T_T good job!
| Isanarya chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
So here is the thing, I understand that you wrote this particular piece quite a while ago but I really had to send you this review. It is absolutely excellent in every sense of the word. I had someone recommend your stories and I was looking through the FFX Auron/Rikku archive and found this lovely jewel. I happen to be a fan of the...odd couple I guess. The ones you don't normally hear about. There is a small selection to choose from in this catagory and even fewer worth reading as sad as that is. But you on the other hand did an excellent job on the characterizations. It is beautiful and thoughtful work. Grade A. If I had this type of talent I'm sure my own writing would be much much better and I wouldn't agonize over it so. As it is I must say that I am very glad to have come upon this. Very glad indeed. So thank you for this lovely story.
| soarxhauntedxflower chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Beatiful, all I can say is that this story was just beautiful. The writing was so poetic and so precise with the feelings and just the emotions of the characters, that I cried. I never cry when I read (I have maybe cried three times when reading in my life) but you could actually feel what Rikku was going through and how much Auron really loved her in the story.
I especially love the comparisons between Rikku and the different places of Spira. Not only was it devestatingly original, but just so beautiful to read. Also the part when Auron was thinking about when he was younger really hit me over the head. Most people like Aurikku because of the age and mentality difference. When you had Auron wonder about if he was younger it really threw me cause there really is no way of knowing. Even now I'm tossing ideas around in my head of what would have happened.
Aurikku is a very difficult match to get right, but I believe that this story is the basics of what the relationship is about. I think that anybody thinking about writing and Aurikku should read this story first for a deeper understanding of the relationship whether it be an event story or a deeper more anylitical type.
It was an uptmost privelige to read a story like this so thank you very much!
| Besh4221 chapter 2 . 4/28/2009
This made me obscenely happy...but also obscenely sad. Auron/Rikku has always been one of my favorite FFX pairings, even though I know, like all us shippers do, that it would never actually work between them. But it's nice to imagine.
You did a wonderful job writing this, and I, for one, would not have minded reading all the "She is..." parts where they were supposed to go. But mayhap that's just me.
Anyway, you really managed to capture what would happen if they ever did become a couple, Auron being what he is. It made me want to cry, except I can't do that. So, I'll just settle for being extraordinarily melancholy.
You still did a phenomenal job, and I consider myself priveleged to have read this.
| Rock-Nye chapter 2 . 2/5/2009
That was amazing.
That story was absolutely beautiful, and I was near tears by the end there.
You write wonderfully. Please do something with that talent.
| tracy chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
I really appreciate your fics. I'm a complete fan now. :D
You write beautifully! Thanks for writing, and please write more FF fan fic!
| Singing In The Dark chapter 2 . 8/11/2008
That was a very beautiful story...I cried through it the first time I read it. The best Auron story I have ever read...You really got how he felt, his emotions...beautiful. Thank you for writing this.
| Xx-Pandora-xX chapter 2 . 4/30/2008
that was beautiful. i'm a huge fan of imagery so i liked the outtakes in your second chapter too. it was sad, but sometimes thats better than giving something a fluffy ending. very nice.
| JingYee chapter 2 . 3/28/2008
T.T You did a very good job.
| serenbach chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
This story is amazingly powerful, so well written. It is sad and beautiful. Amazing.