Reviews for A Paradoxical Life
nomoreupdates2 chapter 8 . 11/2/2008
So cute how Rianna asked Remus out and he said no because he thought he was too sick but then he said YES! YAY! I wouldn't actually mind if you made it a Remus/Rianna story although I do like the chemistry between Rianna and Sirius.

Sirius is SO jealous he just doesn't know it yet. Haha!
nomoreupdates2 chapter 7 . 11/2/2008
FInally some Sirius/Rianna action although I thought Sirius cursing her with devil's snare made him a bit of an asshole.

Did you mean for that scene after charms with him pushing his wand into her neck to be kinda hot? Cuz I thought it was...and then Sirius' stomach ruined it. haha hilarious.

I love Remus. He is just so sweet. I am curious about this DEAL Sirius suggested. Hm...
Naflower05 chapter 10 . 11/1/2008
haha this chapter was so hilarious, Sirius is the weirdest creeper in the world, I love him! countinue? ]
nomoreupdates2 chapter 6 . 11/1/2008
speaking of whipped..."Hey Lily!" That was such a good line. I love the part where remus told them all that he thought with only his brain. Very very funny about how pissed James got haha.
nomoreupdates2 chapter 5 . 10/31/2008
Oh Rianna flirting with Lupin. And I think Lupin kinda liked it. Aw he's so cute when he's embarrassed. I can't wait though for when you get some Rianna/Sirius fluff going on!

Finally Sirius sees that Rianna is not actually plotting against him. lol Great chapter!
nomoreupdates2 chapter 4 . 10/31/2008
Shorter review now. I have to read the next chapter. I really liked this one. Hagrid was a bit off but that's okay!
nomoreupdates2 chapter 3 . 10/31/2008
Haha that was funny. I liked how Sirius accidentally tripped her and then she totally did something he didn't expect. I also like how Sirius is still convinced that Rianna is up to something.

I also loved how she talked to him in the hallway. The whole, forced to interact with you thing was really really good.
nomoreupdates2 chapter 2 . 10/31/2008
I liked the part where Rianna was outside and was walking barefoot in the grass and then met the marauders - we all know where they were - before totally owning Sirius. That was sweet.

One thing, I think that kissing Reg on the cheek was a little much. I mean, I know she considers him as a kod brother but I don't kiss my little sister in public. And I think he should have been more embarrassed by having to be saved by her. I dunno, sounds more logical to me.

Aw Sirius, how I love you. All your thinking that the whole world is against you and wanting to save your brother from corruption when really, all Rianna wants to do is get you to tutor him. Which you wouldn't do anyways! Haha. Good chapter over all though.
nomoreupdates2 chapter 1 . 10/31/2008

I think the first chapter is very promising. I think Rianna is a cool character that most people could relate with (who doesn't feel like and outcast sometimes?).

I like the uptake you've taken with Regulus by making him a good guy versus an evil death eater. Will his friendship with Rianna be one of the reasons he becomes what he becomes? Hm I'll read the next chapter!
kat183 chapter 10 . 10/27/2008
Poor Sirius what a life, but you lifted the story to finish on a laugh. The dance scene was very funny. Looking forward to the next chapter. chapter 9 . 5/30/2008
Great story, I love the how realistic your characters are, and your descriptions are amazing!
Amatsurin chapter 6 . 5/2/2007
Awesome story... xD I love SBOC fics, but it isn't often when you find a really good one like this. Rianna is an awesome original character and I wish I could have found this story before! I would have reviewed each chapter individually in a row, but that might have seemed a bit obessive... Lol. Can't wait for the next update! I hope it's real soon!
PadfootStripQuidditch chapter 6 . 4/29/2007
"Or maybe she wanted you in her!" - That made me laugh alittle harder then I should have. Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
PadfootStripQuidditch chapter 5 . 4/26/2007
Man update, update! What a prat Sirius is! Can't wait for more! A story alert and author favorite for me for sure!

Ow I want to hurt Sirius! Can't wait for more again!
Lets play x D e a d chapter 4 . 3/7/2007
I like it alot, I'm hoping you'll update soon.
41 | « Prev Page 1 2 3 Next »