|Reviews for The Kids Aren't Alright|
| ToastySama chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Well written fiction.
| Lucyole chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
wow that was really good i like that kind of story can you write more
and maybe a ishizu marik that would be awesome.
*gives you lots of cookies*
| Shiro Ryuu chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
...Definitely good enough to leave me speachless. That had me about thi-i-is close to crying, and that's not something many stories can do t_t That was really, seriously beautiful. Now I just have to ask, have you ever read Angel Sanctuary? If not, you should :) All hail controversy!
| Ariadne Bassarid chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Yurg, Lells. Normally I stay away from incest. Heh. It's a good motto for both life and fanfiction. Was well-written though.
Have you read Wasteland by Francesca Lia Block?
| Growing Pain chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Whoa. This was the first fic I have read on this pairing, and you did a real good job on it too! The last line made an excellent ending, and it gave a whole new perception to why the parents could have divorced in the first place.
| Yami Koibito chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
*sniffs* Aw..so kawaii. Brother and Sister, aw...This is my first Shizuka x Jou fic and..it's great. _ I think they make a cute couple. *gives plushies* You're so great at describing stuff. Oi..I wish I could do /that/ kind of writing. Well this was a kawaii/great/awesome story ya got here. I'm definately putting this on my faves list.
| Roxie Archer chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Well, I have to admit, this is the first het fic I've read for Yu-Gi-Oh!, tending to stick to Jou/Seto or even Jou/Yami/Yugi. But if you're waiting for a "OMG u r sic" review, you won't find it here. The fact is, YGO is steeped in Egyptian mythology and so anyone who does give you such a review cannot truely know or appriciate YGO now can they? Osiris himself was wed to his sister Isis, as was Set to his sister. I found your account of this pairing to make a rather beautiful piece and an insiration to other writers looking to take such pairings into account. A perfect portrayal of the two. Congratulations.
| Miyosuke chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
You've been reading Angel Sanctuary, ne? (I want to read it, but my parents know about the incest and would disapprove. Sigh.)
I like this fic. It's...Really sad, but beautiful at the same time. Wonderful...! :)
| Serenity Meowth chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Yeah, Yugioh does inspire incest stories...*sigh*.
| Dark and One Other chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Very sad. Good, but sad. Oh well. I don't like this stuff in real life, but I have read Angel Sanctuary, so bleh, my mind contradicts itself. :P Anyway, I think you did a great job, and my advice to anyone who reads and doesn't like is this: When reading a story, you have to keep in mind who the author wanted to be together in this particular situation. Then, root for the pair and be happy when the ending for them is happy! And of course, be sad and touched when the ending is sad, gloomy, angsty, etc. Remember the purpose of the story, then enjoy it! Yay, good job on this pairing my friend. Have a cookie!
| Demented Insane Spirit chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Well, I agree with you. -_- Shizuka is always going, "Big brother! Oh, I love my big brother! He's the best!" Sometimes I wonder what she means by 'He's the best' lol. Anyway, good job on the fic. I couldn't have done it any better...(o.o) dont think anyone could. _ ciao
| TinyClownBean1 chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Now that you mention it I can see the little bit of incest that is implied in the show. This was actually very good. It seemed like they were a lot younger than the time period of when she had her vision repaired though. It doesn't matter because this piece was very well written and despite the controversy of it I'm glad that you decided to post. I hope no one flames you for it since you did warn them because it is exceptional. I loved the ending line...it was just so beautiful. it seemed to sum up the entire fic. Fantastic job!
| joeyluver-dragonofra chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
ok well im not a fan but im more oposed to yaio so this is at least a step up it was touching and well i read nat least anything so im gona say good w
| xXxDead.x.InsidexXx chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Woah. That's powerful. Love knows no boundaries, ne? It was just really.. just amazing really, poweful words, curling around two loving, yet somewhat crushed hearts. Its funny how words can either make a soul or brake it, you've managed to paint a beautiful picture there, well done Lell.