A beautiful story.

Aww, so sweet.

So angsty!

just lovely :)

That was wonderful and I especially like the last line.

Great ending line! And of course there was one thing he needed to reassure her for! LOL Beautiful story, romantically written.

Fantastic chapter - I could totally understand each other's discomfort and unease.

Sarek is a sweet sugar-pie. At least he's concerned about Amanda's emotional state concerning Pon Far. It is nice of him to explain all the facts to her instead of letting her tumble headfirst into a situation that she may have not wanted to be involved in. Love conquers all, including Pon Far.

I know I'd still have him. ;)

Oh I like it. I like it a lot! Good job!

Aww, what a nice ending - or beginning I should say. :) So, tell us... where, exactly, is that trigger point? LOL! Really wonderfully handled, Mary, considering the sensitive nature of the story.

That was so sweet! Great job! I absolutely loved it!

Sigh! I think Sarek might be a true romantic given half a chance. But like one of your other reviewers asked...where is this trigger point? Enquiring minds need to know!

Perfect ending. Even when you know they will work it out it is good to see it in writing.

". . . It their hearts and souls neither was ever to sleep alone again." Wonderful way to express this.

Now, is that trigger point unique to Sarek, or is it a common point of interest? You know, in case I ever meet a Vulcan.

That was a really beautiful fic. I suppose that'd be the one question that would spring to mind if faced with what Amanda was faced with and it was very tastefully handeled. You're one of the writers on here that really raises the bar for other writers and this fic was well above that bar. I hope to see more from you soon.

I liked your idea of pon farr not being violent as much as it is a loss of control. It wouldn't be logical to harm one's mate at such a time, especially if there is supposed to be a close bond between the couple. I hope to read more about how they work through this. :)