|Reviews for Run|
| CrazyInsomaniac chapter 7 . 8/31/2006
bravo! an awesome ending to an awesome fic, i applaude you! (claps) simply stupendous mate!
I always thought dat Robin would take his mentor down...i just didnt think dat Bruce would try to kill his own son 0.0 dat was a shocker...0.0
Im looking forward to reading more of your fics, just keep up the great job !
| THEJAYMAN chapter 7 . 9/4/2005
GREAT JOB! LOVED IT!
| Lil art girl chapter 6 . 9/3/2005
wow, ur story is amazing~ but r the titans really dead...or was it a fake? r they being held captive?
| THEJAYMAN chapter 6 . 9/1/2005
Bravo, can't wait for the last chapter, I liked the tension in this one
| Aliso chapter 6 . 8/31/2005
AH! This is so cool! I can't wait to read the ending; I love stories like this! No shipping, no crappy villans, just CSI-stylie action!
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/31/2005
Nice story so far. Me likey!XD
| THEJAYMAN chapter 5 . 8/28/2005
Forgot to mention, it might help if you lower the rating, I think it can go for a Teen rating, might get more readers!
| THEJAYMAN chapter 5 . 8/28/2005
Don't be too down with yourself, I think this is the best story I have been reviewing in a long time, no joke. I really like how its like a movie, this chapter it felt like Mission Impossible, the first few chapters like Identity, the number of movies this fic reminds me of is US Marshals, Mission Impossible, Game, Identity, and Fugitive, and it is so cool because I love all those movies. Anyways, I am really looking forward to the ending and I seriously didn't see Raven coming in and I liked how you made Robin paranoid like that, really cool and realistic for the circumstances. If you need help looking for a breakthrough, read some popular stories that got a lot of reviews, find out through the reviews what they liked, see what there summery said, and put a story together from that. I didn't do that myself and got lucky with my breakthrough story, anyways, once you get a breakthrough story, you get a following of loyal reviewers and then you put your favorite style and type of story and then you see the number of reviews. I had a series called Fall of Robin, it looked like a flop, but after my story Can't Live Without Her, the series got a decent number of reviews and now the sequel to the Fall of Robin stories, The New Teen Titans, which I am currently working on, is getting a lot of reviews and this makes me happy because I am writing a story I have wanted to share for months and now have a group to share it too. Sorry for the long review but don't lose hope, don't think people don't like it because I love it! Update soon, the suspense is killing me! I love these types of thrillers! AND I hope you continue to write
| THEJAYMAN chapter 4 . 8/25/2005
I thought this story would attract a lot more attention, it is a true thriller, feels almost like a Hollywood movie to be honest, I really love it, you have a good style that is very fresh and nice to see. I myself needed a couple of stories to find my breakthrough story, and once you find that things start to fly from there, however, it is usually the idea you least like that is the most liked, don't know why. Eventhough my first few stories weren't as popular as my last two, I still love them and actually reread them too. And my latest story, is actually inspired by my first three stories written and it is doing very well. I think you should continue and finish this story, and make Robin succede, he has been through a lot so far
| Ian Reid chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Well, this has caught my attention.
Hmm...For constructive criticism, I'd say break the paragraphs down a bit more. Makes it longer, but the reader won't suffer from eyestrain. I suggest you paragraph during all forms of speech, including thoughts. Makes it relatively easier as well. But your style is good, in exception of the long paragraphs and grammar, you've got yourself a gem here.
| THEJAYMAN chapter 3 . 8/19/2005
Victor Jayman, love it, this story is very interesting, still reminds me of US Marshals, thanks for throwing me in the story, I have to say I am surprised the reviews arent pouring in, its a good story, I like it a lot and now it seems like it might be turning into a political thriller sort of thing, I can't wait for the next chapter, thanks again and please update when you get your reviews, try waiting for three or four days before the next update, then you may get more reviews
| THEJAYMAN chapter 2 . 8/15/2005
I like this story, reminds me of US Marshals, Identity, and Momento, all at the same time. Very cool, hope you update soon and get more reviews!