|Reviews for My Sister|
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/21/2014
Sorry to say but u spelt zoros name zolo just saying
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
You suck at naming
| icerain chapter 13 . 8/2/2013
write more please... and don't stop at a suspenseful place either
| Monkey D. Writer chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
*gasp!* LUFFY turned down FOOD! FOOD I TELL YA, FOOD! IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD! EVERYBODY RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! *runs around in circles, screaming*
| kiara chapter 10 . 4/13/2011
wow luffy was using naruto's catchphrase when he was telling lana about him sailing with shanksD
| Luffy95 chapter 13 . 5/17/2010
please are you going to write more chapters? Please i really like it!
/Your Friend Rebecca
| Murasaki Argenteria chapter 13 . 1/17/2010
OMG! Even though the format is confusing, it's pretty good!
Are you, like, a scrpit writer or an author...?
Well anyways, please ontinue
| aeae chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
I have to know what happens next
| packardball chapter 13 . 9/29/2007
hi i think the way he story was written was uniqed never have i read a story like it was don in a play playwritters are rar on fanfic but anyway the plot was a good chocies and explains why luffy as a scare on his face i bet a lot of people are wonder why that as well to sumerzie he whole thing (ahem) IT WAS FANTASIC DIE SNAJI MAKE SANJI DIEE DEATH TOO SANJI ER BEAT HIM UP AGIN AND LANA SHOULD FALL FOR ZOLO YEA ZOLO YEA. but just making a sugestion thank you for reading my comment and have a nices day
| Hikari Ino chapter 13 . 11/27/2006
| Edwardzoro2813 chapter 13 . 10/28/2006
This is so good! Update plz!
| supercrazygirl chapter 13 . 10/21/2006
I LOVED IT! LOVED IT! NOW CONTINUE OR ELSE! (else:i will rip your eyes out and watch you die a painful and slow death) Have a nice evening.
| sailor alpha tomboy chapter 13 . 6/15/2006
please go on.
| KyuuHana chapter 13 . 2/11/2006
Sorry I haven't read it in awhile It's good I wonder what Jose's plan is though
| punkdboy chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
dude this story is awesome right more