|Reviews for Rebecca|
| Phanatic4Phantom chapter 21 . 1/19/2007
Ok, let's try this again, because FFN is not letting me post a review for this...
I definitely liked this one, Bex. It was nice to read what had been going on behind the scenes during the movie. Having Erik tied up with his daughter was a good way to fill those missing hours.
I had no problems with the storyline in general, except for the occasional words/phrases which seemed a bit too modern for what you've got presented here. If you are open to consider changing these very few lines, the dialogue would have a better flow to them. Hopefully that makes sense. Otherwise, I enjoyed this.
Thank you and good luck on the sequel, should you return to work on it in the future.
| Phantom Muse chapter 13 . 8/23/2006
Still very good but I must say, with respect, I highly doubt Erik would be in the same room when the doctor came in. More than likely, he would be standing behind the wall listening.
I don't mean to be rude her it's just, well...I've written things similar in my story, where Erik does something strange, out of character, and I was criticized heavily. I'm just giving you my thoughts, awesome story though! (thumbs up)!
Au revoir min ami!
| Phantom Muse chapter 6 . 8/21/2006
I must say I'm quite impressed and pleased with this story! You, mon ami, are now on my alert list and favorites list.
Fop Hunter the ALmighty
| Twistedeveryway69 chapter 22 . 10/8/2005
That was evil! lol i LOVE your story! Putting it on alert. :P LOVE it! Please add more!
| Estelle Tiniwiel chapter 22 . 10/7/2005
Yay! A sequel! Can't wait. Have to know what happens after that cliffhanger.
| Dragonflame-05 chapter 21 . 10/6/2005
Post A sequel or i will hunt you down. I'm kiding but please post a sequel. Please.
| mamaXunicorn chapter 22 . 10/6/2005
maybe...just maybe...you can bring Christine back to erik. I dont mind, its entirely up to you.
(p.s. my email is
| Helden chapter 21 . 10/5/2005
sequel SEQUEL! WRITE A SEQUEL
| Luna Bellanotte chapter 21 . 10/3/2005
Holy crap! Great story! I kno i haven't been able to review in a while but i've been very busy with school and junk. OMG! You have to write a sequel! I hate cliffehangers! They should be banned! LOL. Please please please please please and so on and so forth...write a sequel! Thanks so much for the FANTASTIC story!
| Estelle Tiniwiel chapter 21 . 10/3/2005
Yes! Please write a sequel! I'm sorry i haven't updated for so long, but i haven't got round to reading lots of chapters till now.
| Erik'sDarkRose chapter 21 . 9/29/2005
Okay I really dont think you can end a story (without a sequel) on a cliffhanger. That doesn't work. So if you don't write a next chapter or a sequel i shall be forced to Punjab you.
| PhantomLover05 chapter 21 . 9/29/2005
WRITE A SEQUEL! PLEASE!
| Love-your-suit chapter 21 . 9/29/2005
please for the love of all that is holy write more! please! for the love of erik!
| mamaXunicorn chapter 21 . 9/29/2005
OMG! now you have to update! PLEASE I BEG OF YOU! DONT LEAVE ME HANGING I LOVE THIS STORY!
| JessicaTheFair chapter 21 . 9/29/2005
I would love a sequel!