Reviews for Late
martinimaker chapter 6 . 9/14/2005
i think that you since kayla is pregnant, that she should tell peter and they should get bakc together
All About Patricia chapter 6 . 9/14/2005
You should so get Peter and Kayla back have Kayla finally tell Peter the ..that's all i got!love your story!

All About Patricia
Krystle chapter 6 . 9/14/2005
you should let peter and kayla back together and i want you to be contiune the story ok
KJ chapter 5 . 9/13/2005
I like it. Please continue, im on the edge of my seat... well not really, because im on a bouncy ball so id fall, but its really good.
Godricsgrl89 chapter 5 . 9/12/2005


Crystal Blue chapter 5 . 9/12/2005
I loved it. I can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold. I hope Kayla gets back together with Peter. They are such a great couple. Peter would be a great father. Keep up the good work!
Ron's Sweetie chapter 5 . 9/6/2005
Good story keep up the good work.
Alyssa chapter 5 . 9/5/2005
I like this story. Good job. I hope that you have Peter and Kayla get back together.
Courtney chapter 5 . 9/4/2005
Please Continue! It's very good and very well written. Please get Kayla and Peter back together! :) Please continue ASAP!
Lady Jayne DeSota chapter 5 . 9/4/2005
I really like the premise of this story! Please please please keep going! You have inspired me to write some strong medicine fic!
kaitlyn chapter 5 . 9/4/2005
keep going it is really good
All About Patricia chapter 3 . 9/3/2005
Wow! i really loved the story.I can't wait until we get to know what happens next! keep writing.

All About Patricia
lifelover chapter 3 . 8/30/2005
post more asap!
Ron's Sweetie chapter 3 . 8/30/2005
Good Story keep going i like it so far.
drvvh chapter 2 . 8/27/2005
this is a good idea... I'm really interested in it... I have a little constructive critism though, the story would be a lot better if you incorporated the dialouge in with some sentences setting the scene and showing how the characters are feeling. Please update soon
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