|Reviews for A Wizards Lament|
| CaBuckeye chapter 10 . 2/27
oops. "dentition" means of or related to teeth. "detention" is the student punishment. otherwise, very good story.
| passanger chapter 4 . 1/27
I really like the story so far.
And I have noticed some errors: in fifth year Ron and Hermione are prefects, not head boy and girl, and have prefect pins. Also, you have a habit of replacing 'have' with 'of'. I realise you probably don't consider it an error but it really bugs me.
| Imperial Raven chapter 21 . 9/15/2013
I'm sorry... are you implying that Harry is talking to Tom after he raped him? He must have no self-respect then!
| CaBuckeye chapter 45 . 9/13/2013
Thank you for a wonderful story. I HAVE to read the sequel and that is where I am going right now!
| CaBuckeye chapter 7 . 9/12/2013
Okay... I'll bite. What does "Ja ne!" mean in English? My copy of Google Translate does not cut it.
| Vanessa Oliveira chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
Harry is getting dependent on the shade and I think it can be harmful in the future
| Vanessa Oliveira chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
Ok let's see if I understand ... Friends, and order sirius think that Harry killed Molly. How much love my god ... * irony *
If I see Ron pass the street I give it a shot with a gun muggle
| Vanessa Oliveira chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
she died :o
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/22/2013
I love the story its great
but in 1st chptr its "harry lay back" not "lied back"
When u say "perfect" badges it shud be spelt "prefect" at least thats wht i thought u meant if im wrong sorry
& its spelt "detention" "dittention
| jasperslover chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
that shadow was rlly intense! im not sure if i would have been comforted by it. lol
| HP-fanfic-fan101 chapter 15 . 8/8/2013
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/23/2013
Maybe it is only because im on chap 11, but whats going to happen with the new boy and harry? Ill probably find out as i read :p
| flaming rose chapter 21 . 7/11/2013
1. Grammer mistakes -especially(?)punctuation(?)- every where.
2. There's supposed to be a "-" not a comma when people stutter. Just to let u know.
3. I know there tie/er/ing, but big sceens like when Tom and Harry come to a 'truce' are important to the reader, so they don't feel lost about most things.
4. I'd suggest getting a beta.
5. Thank u, peace, and have a good summer!
| Ash-Bookworm113 chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
huh...y'no mrs. black isn't so bad after a while...as long as your a dark wizard that is...or shagging one or turning evil ...or a bunch of other acceptable things...hee hee hee
| Ash-Bookworm113 chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
yep dont mess with sirius! remember what he did to bella...even tried crucio...so dont mess with him :) love this fic from the start!