Reviews for Trials for The Unicorn
MacBeth2001 chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Just to clarify, I wrote Toturi 3 in that last review, but the site dropped the other two "I"s from my roman numeral. Again, great story.
MacBeth2001 chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Another L5R author! There are LOTS out there, but they don't post here for some reason.

I started this section with my story, "Secrets, Love, and Duty'. You have to set the browser for "all ratings" to see it. I rated it "M" for some violence. The older story was moved here by the admins. But enough about me...

This is a great tale. Your lacking in English makes it hard to read, but the feelings and scenes come through all right. An English pre-reader could help, but there'd be a lot of reworking to do. The canon is okay, except that the Burning Sands events were actually 30 years prior to Toturi I's reign. Keep it up, though!

(Email me if you want. I'm an Evangelion fan, too.)