|Reviews for Breakdown|
| Silverthreads chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Fine writing, very engaging.
| Avreana chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
This story made me cry, and that doesn't happen often! Good job :) I've noticed the slight breakdown in friendship between the two on the show and this story really works with that. And I loved that it wasn't a perfect happy ending.
| drufan chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Liked this story. It was odd and their relationship seems out of kilter on the show. Really liked your take.
| Elisa chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Great start? Hope you do have more chapters coming! John and Rodney have some trust issues to resolve. Hope you do plan to update and update soon!
| Miran Anders chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Very nice character work. I particularly liked the stiff interchange between Rodney and John near the end... and I appreciated the lack of 'band-aid'... nothing happened to make it all better. Time, indeed. Thanks - Miran
| Dr. Dredd chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
This second part was great, too. I like how you didn't make Rodney's trust completely restored at the end. That would have been too nice and easy.