Reviews for Breakdown
Silverthreads chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Fine writing, very engaging.
Avreana chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
This story made me cry, and that doesn't happen often! Good job :) I've noticed the slight breakdown in friendship between the two on the show and this story really works with that. And I loved that it wasn't a perfect happy ending.
drufan chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Liked this story. It was odd and their relationship seems out of kilter on the show. Really liked your take.
Elisa chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Great start? Hope you do have more chapters coming! John and Rodney have some trust issues to resolve. Hope you do plan to update and update soon!
Miran Anders chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Very nice character work. I particularly liked the stiff interchange between Rodney and John near the end... and I appreciated the lack of 'band-aid'... nothing happened to make it all better. Time, indeed. Thanks - Miran
Dr. Dredd chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
This second part was great, too. I like how you didn't make Rodney's trust completely restored at the end. That would have been too nice and easy.
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