Reviews for Intertwining Hearts
OriginalBlueCat chapter 2 . 12/30/2016
OMG IT WAS LOVELY first you went for girl x girl (Star and Rae) Then you bring beastboy in to it and triple the realationship afterwards they make love then They tell Cy and you did great on him missing the birthday trying to make it up so HEARTFELT so PASSIONATE then you bring in the official trio after that you bring in the feelings from Cy and Rob Robin being exactly what he would be and you placed a beT IF THIS WERE A REPOT CARD YOU JIST GOT ALL A'S spelling PERFECT grammar PERFECT setting PERFECT plot PERFECT EVERTHINNG WAS SO PERFECT I MIGHT DIE you are a great writer And I hope you don't end this story I have only seen one mind like yours and that is the pure and perfect mind of JESUS
Guest chapter 2 . 3/24/2015
I really like this story but i wish there was more
Guest chapter 2 . 1/9/2015
u should continue this storry please. its really goood
Guest chapter 2 . 12/17/2014
You should make a new one where cyborg likes robin and slade dies and the titans are all happy
wolve lover123 chapter 2 . 7/12/2014
that was great i amolst cried when beast boy was said becuase i fell the same way really good write more more more pleassssssssse
Guest chapter 2 . 6/12/2014
Lucky boy this is notcwhat i expected but i love the fact robins upset i hate that guy chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Dahkoro5050 chapter 2 . 2/3/2014
Serfes you right Robin.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
Make another one that connects to this one and Robin gets terra
WolfBloodBaptism chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
That was beautiful *sniffs* I wouldn't mind reading more about BB/Star/Rae, they make an interesting...trio?

Not G. Ivingname chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
I know I already reviewed this but after rereading this I reiliesed something, i was reading it with the wrong head, and I now know this is horrible written, filled with akward diologe and far to much detail.
Toriano.Flacko chapter 2 . 10/14/2008
Ah, the jerk-off... he weeps... FAN-TASTIC! Bwahaha! Thank you, my friend, for this exquisite masterpiece you have blessed this site with? Oh, yeah, the lemon was good too, but the rest was really good, too! Hmm, but would it have all been the same without that last part in the last chapter? Hmm... That's something to think about... over pie...

So, any hint of a continuation to this, any at all? I mean, there are definitely gonna be some hardships, but you know, if you don't want to do that part, fine. As burger king says( I think ) Have it your way! (warning: the only reason you are allowed to have it your way is because this was so good. No favors allowed; this includes...) Good on ya!
Not G. Ivingname chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
If your girlfriend tells you she is Bisexual, you celeberate it! who would not like a girl that likes kissing other girls (besides Robin, homophobics, and christian fanatics)?
cRzYmAn676 chapter 2 . 5/23/2008
aw, little Robster lade a boo-boo, yes he did, yes he did! no more Princess Koriand'r for you, friend! youdon know whatcha got till Beast Boy's got her..

SP: you totally jacked up all those sayings, dude...

your point?

SP: eh-em. mr or ms author, Rob started showing his 'Slade' side in this one, didn't he? trying to use everything to his own advantage, while he's already failed. (sigh) pity. i wonder what really set dude off... when a guys girlfriend willingly tells him that she's bisexual, he don't break up wit her! he try to work tings out, and keep his place, not taking more or less place in that girl heart, he does.

so... your saying Robn was already screwed in ta head?

SP: yeah.


SP: on a higher note (any higher and we'll be in outer space) nice, through and through. coulda been split into shorter chapters, but awright the way it is.
cRzYmAn676 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
wow... BB was thinking about suicide? where did that happen...


oh, right! ni-hi-hice! but one thing bothers me. why the hell does everybody else's ideas come together and leave a dude lookin for his eyeballs on the floor just to technically make them pop out again from the sheer brilliance of the story;, while my ideas barely get a review? did i mention nice fic, but extremely long?

SP; we just did...

... true dat, but... anyway, trust me on the name thing. it's spelled right, i'm just not logged in right now.
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