Reviews for Sleepover |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is...so ridiculously ON POINT. This really felt like an episode being played out for me. Without being descriptive it was so in character that I felt dejavĂș |
![]() ![]() I liked this story and I think it was pretty well-written overall! There is just one thing that didn't really make sense to me in this chapter; when Danny saved Sam from having the walkway fall on her, why didn't he bring her outside like he did with everyone else? Oh, also, I'm pretty sure Danny wouldn't need his crutches for another two weeks after the end of the story. Remember, he heals quite quickly, especially in his ghost form. I'd say he would probably need the crutches for a total of one week at the most (particularly if he spends as much time as he can in his ghost form, which heals even faster than his human form) and that the burns themselves would probably be completely healed two weeks after the fire, and that's only if they were third degree burns. In the show, his minor cuts and bruises have healed within minutes and the more severe gashes have healed after only a few hours. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cottoneye Joe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Danny loves astronomy |
![]() ![]() im a little upset at this chapter because danny is supposed to know a lot about stars and stuff since he wanted to be an astronaut. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Encore,Encore, please we need a encore story was alsome, and it's the best one so far that I'll read. Encore sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was the school not nasty burger |
![]() ![]() It was very well done and i would love for you to make even more of these. |
![]() ![]() Yay! Danny and Sam are together n Sam beat Paulina n I'm just soooooooo happy n in love with this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was that Cotton Eyed Joe. Where did you come from? Where did you go? Where did you come from Cotton Eyed Joe? |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story and I'm so glad that I had the pleasure of reading it. Thank you so much for writing this and I hope you luck on all your future endeavors! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story Didn't Sam saved Danny of the fire, since he was unconscious? The story is very cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Danny did tango with Sam XD Danny must had fun doing that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Paulina got herself in Sam's enemy list |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sam is sneaky XD |