Please... PLEASE! You must continue this story! I've read it again and again, and I want you to continue so badly!

Cool story! I liked it! My fave part was when Magus MADE Flea look at him And I like the name that you gave Flea at the beggining. cool. I love this pairin as well, and keep up the good work!

erm...you do know that Flea is a guy, right?

Oh well, common mistake.

The writing style on this one isn't much, but the story is starting to get interesting. And do I detect a hint of MagusXFlea comming in the near future?

It was so sad, like I wanted to cry and it's so well writen. It definately wants to make me read more!

This is good! Poor Flea! update soon