|Reviews for More Than A Memory|
| asdfkwoei chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
okay, that was beautiful. Very insightful and metaphorical...love the part about the taint... Cloud is such a complicated soul to write, and I think u did great on the It Ends With Me, and how this one too. Love ur stories, keep them coming ne?
| Mahi-Mahi chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
gotta love it! great work
| Monochromatic Pylon chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
O.o you've done a good job. It was very nice written. I like Marlene's pov...
| kori hime chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
*sniff* Aw... So sad. It ook me a while to figure out that was Vincent. -.-;; Silly me. This well written.
| Hell Rell chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Yo MajinBakaHentai you faggot I'll smack off your Kuffi for thinking that rainbow shit you damn homo.
| samantha chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
wow i REALLY LOVE this story i the paring is really nice to, marlene/cloud it's diffrent and i like it your should REALY make a chapter2 or some story where cloud does come back. I'd like to see marlenes exprission :)keep up on the wounderfullf writing
| Verdot chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Now THIS is a concept. And I love it. I love the description and the lack of names (though you give great hints) and all that.
And I love the whole idea of the taint and all that. _
| Salacassera chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
I really enjoyed seeing Marlene's point of view. Her thought about how Cloud tainted the others was the line that hit me the most.
| MajinBakaHentai chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Whoo! Great work! I really did like seeing Vincent there, and do I detect some small implications of Cloud/Vin? _
Love that you tied it to "It Ends With Me", I guessed you might do that when you said it was a deathfic.