Reviews for Not Only a Granger |
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![]() ![]() Very heart warming story. Father son dynamic is establish really well! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just gotta say. I kinda dislike Hermione in this fanfiction. Not a mother myself so I'm not really sure what I would do but as a daughter, I don't like Hermione... She's so confusing. Like the reasons she's keeping the secret of Nathan's father is so confusing. She was painted as the 'right' person and Nathan being the one who threw a tantrum (which he did). But then she mentioned to Harry how she explained why she can't tell Nathan who her father is. But like she really didn't... she just told him she can't tell him while crying and telling him it hurts her when he acts like that. Like is it so shocking that he's mad!? Won't even tell him the reason (even a vague version) of why she's keeping it from him. Theeeen when Nathan started ignoring her, she was ready to reveal everything 'good' reasons be damned because she was hurting. Yet when she saw Nathan hurting from the secret from his classmates, her 'reasons' pop up again... it's frustrating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wouah, just finish your story, and i really really loved it. Thanks you for sharing your story. Your writing is amazing, I love your characters, and of course your plot ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, i don't know if you will read my comment, but i really have to congratulate you. With 2 chapters you have made me so stress (I had to tell you !) So thanks you, you writing is very good ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay but I love how Snape's walls have come crashing down and his son melts lifelong walls. best slow burn this story has been. I wish it wouldn't have to stop lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay but this is the cutest story ever. x |
![]() ![]() Hi! Just wanted to comment this was really well done, |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! Now one of my favorite stories! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() This is so wholesome, perfect, i love it very much! Thank you very much, i cried every wholesome chapter :"D |
![]() ![]() Is something wrong with Severus? I don't know why I feel like he's sick or something! Please! do not die! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello dear ferpotter! First, I wanted to say thank you for the amazing piece "Not only Granger". You did a great job, it was really fun to read. I'm just in awe of the plot and forever your fan. I read other your works, I like everything delightfully, but this work just sunk into my soul. Secondly, I wanted to ask you for permission to translate "Not only Granger" into Russian. We have a lot of fans of this fandom in Russia, I'm sure they will appreciate these. I really want you to share your work with them .. I am an excellent translator and I will do everything right. With love, ssandel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read this story like 5 times already and now I'm gonna read it again because it's great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() My dear,it was wonderful story... I was kept glued to it, haven't even slept the night, only one hour before heading to work . It was simply marvellous, heart touching and full of feelings. My sincere respect and compliments for your work and dedication. You have a gift with words, don't let it fade! |
![]() ![]() It's a pity that a story written with good language lacks logic when it comes to characters' motivations. I can't imagine a rape victim being grateful to her rapist, even if it did save her life. The saving live part is logical, intellectual, it doesn't change how she would feel and react to the act. And anima libera is completely cheating. To give the characters a way to spy on anyone and intrude into their lives and gather information without the person knowing it? Not believable. It's like bringing Superman to Die Hard and be impressed how he kicked the terrorist's ass. Not to mention the idiotic behaviour everyone displays. And unrealistic. The only realistic thing here is Snape's resentment. Just try to imaging the most horrible thing you did to another person, the thing you are ashamed of, and then how would one react to see a constant reminder of it? The 12year old simply being there doesn't suddenly change peoples' feelings. Teenagers are often annoying even to their families, let alone to a person who is not used to people invading his life, specially if it is a reminder of his shame. And suddenly he has to change and accommodate because of the action of another person. We are used to the idea that we have to sacrifice for children, but for a person who's whole life was a terrible sacrifice it's not an easy idea to accept. I was reading to see if it comes together at the end but it doesn't. Just more strange turns and an army of deus's ex machina. |