Very good start. I am looking forward to more. It is very well written, considering english isn't your first language. If you are still in need of a beta, let me know. My email is ewheeler canada. com

great start! Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.

For someone whose first language is other than English you write remarkably fluently.

I don't see how she thinks the secret can be kept any longer if there's such a strong resemblance though. She should just 'fess up now.

What a great start. I can't wait to see the rest of this story. Hermione's son sounds cool too. Please update with anothr chapter soon

This is one of my favorite ships. I enjoyed the first chapter and looking forward to the next one. Can't wait to see how Hermione gets out of this one or how Severus will react.

Very good start. Looking forward to father and son meeting for the first time. Update soon.

Cool Story update soon!

this is an amazing start. The basis for a truly great story! Just keep up the good work and update frequently and you'll be just fine :)

I'm really looking forward to reading your story (as do other people probably) so please don't dissapoint me (and them) by not updating ;)

Congrats on publishing your first story! It's not easy to do it, but this is an amazing start. It promises to be a wonderful story! Can't wait to see what happens next.

You have a few typos here and there, but nothing a beta reader couldn't fix. If you're looking for one, I'd be more than happy to help out.

Anyway, looking forward to reading more from you soon!

I like this one a lot. If you still need a beta, email me at

Very nice start, I can't wait to see what happens next!

This is a very interesting take on a post HBP Potterverse. I am thoroughly intrigued. I am eagerly awaiting the explanation of Nathan's birth, the relationship between Severus and Hermione (or lack thereof). If you are still looking for a beta I would love to help.

Very intersting. Can't wait for more!