This chapter, for all its emotion, is hilarious!
"A Hufflepuff would have been touched." Lol!
And the bit at the end, “you’ve got crying over a sleeping boy covered” Hahahahahaha love the snark!

I’m revisiting this fic and loving as much as before. You approach the whole thing sensitively. I love the angst too!

Oh Nathan!

This story is surprisingly refreshing and enjoyable. The characters are a little OOC but I’m loving reading the progression. I’m so sorry I haven’t made reviews on the previous 24 chapters. I got caught up on binge reading the story!

Figures that Snape reveals it in a pissing contest. So dissappointed in him.

I've started to read the french version before to finish the story with this English version. The story is very good. Nathan is a nice character.

Harry is too noisy. Gosh! even if he's care but he's so selfish. its not his life, its not his child.

This is a very interesting story idea. I could not figure out HOW Hermione would get unknowingly pregnant via Snape; but KNOW that Snape IS Nathan’s father. Left me delightfully confused; appreciated the answer.

Thank you for sharing this cool story; I do not normally care for next generation type stories. Your Nathan seems like an interesting type of character congratulations !

Thank you for posting this story. I really enjoyed reading it and am a fan of the ship and also the way you structured the story.

Thanks for writing this story. I enjoyed reading it.

lovely story. really sweet.
but please delete your authors notes and other useless postss because its annoying as hell and silly. especially when the app is reading to you.

I’m sorry but Hermione doesn’t seem to be a good parent so far I mean just who does that?

I felt a bit annoyed with Hermione, she kept everyone in the dark to “protect” them

I felt like Hermione is trying too hard...

It’s funny cuz Nathan hates it when Kevin and Andy kept secret from him, and he seemed perfectly fine when he kept about a pretty secret from them first