I love this story :) plz hurry and finish it! :)

This is one of, if not the greatest, Pokeshipping stories out there. So complex and creative. It's an emotional rollarcoaster with many heartracing moments. Just beautiful. So why haven't you finished it? Please, PinkFalcon, you must to understand that most authors would kill for a following like you have. I know that you must it must be hard to make the ending exactly right for such a dynamic story, but three years has been a long wait. Come back and finish this story-you were so close-that's all I ask of you.

I Love this story ... but please plz plz plz update! I've been checking for like a year but still no 19th chapter...please finish this story!

Good first chapter, continues to chapter twi

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish the story!

Please update been waiting years. just re-read it and remembered how you left it at a cliff hanger and was bummed out but yeah awesome story

I hope you finish this! I loveeee this story, amazing, just amazing.

...Wow. I'm speechless. Everything about this fic is perfect! The development, the characterization... the only problem is that the cliffhanger is killing me! Ahhh! I checked your livejournal (I am not a stalker! I just...really wanted to know if there was any news on the next chapter and... okay, yeah, maybe that was a bit stalker-ish. Don't kill me.) and I saw that it took you a year to update chapter 16, so maybe this next chapter is just giving you a hard time as well and you aren't really abandoning this story? I hope so. If not, do you think you can tell us? I'm positive I'm not the only one who is desperately waiting for something (whether it's a goodbye or a little note telling us you're on your way). I won't hold it against you if you do decide to abandon it (it happens, and you would probably have your reasons), but I'd like to know whether or not I should be frequently checking my email, or if my obsessiveness is pointless. ;;

That aside, time for some actual review-y stuff!

Ahem.

Gary takes the whole rivalry thing to a disturbing (creepy, evil, etc.) level. And yet I can actually see it happening.. o.o Although I don't know what to think about a crazy Professor Oak. That one hurts my heart a bit. But I'm too busy sqealing over how adorably awesome Ash is, so i guess it's all right. I JUST WANT TO HUGGLE HIM. Though his eyes reminded me of Edward Cullen... Eugh. But this came first and I personally think Ash is way better. No offense if you like Twilight ;; Rudy's okay, but I'm a bit mad at May (for helping Gary and Contestshippy reasons), but with Max dead, I guess I can see where she's coming from. Still horrible though.

I loved the mother-son bickering between Ash and his mom xD It made me forget he wasn't "normal." Brock is just generally awesome. Ah! I forgot to mention Misty! The story!Misty was just so believably Misty that I really didn't have anything to say..eh heh. SHE IS JUST AS AWESOME THOUGH. But seriously, everything is just so...gah! Believable and awesome.

Uhmm, I guess that's all? Holy hell, this is a long review. Hope you don't mind ; Who knows, maybe this will motivate you? Even a little bit? A girl can dream!

Thanks for a great read! It was a blast. Hope to hear from you soon!

-mei

Hey there! I'm not sure if you still receive these reviews, but I figured I'd submit one anyway to let you know that I still love this story and check regularly to see if you've posted that last chapter that you promised back in '08... This story is just so fantastic and complex and more than I ever expected when I first found it. Misty is so fierce and fantastic and Ash is adorable and Pikachu is amazing and I want to know so much about this world that you've created that I just can't get enough. I've reread this whole story many times and will probably read it many more. I even got my non-fanfiction reading roommate to read it and love it, and she asks me occasionally if you've updated, too. I know you're probably hugely busy and have better things to do than write another chapter for a story you haven't touched in almost three years, but I'd be hugely excited and love you forever if you did!

Take care,

Ally

Hi! Wow! This story is amazing. I've been glued to my computer for days trying to finish. It is not only one of my favorite pokeshipping stories ever but also a simply brilliant fic in itself. I am in love with it. I saw you haven't updated in a long time but I also read that authors note at the end of chapter 8 and I'm hoping that this will be the review that will remind you to finish it soon. I would really hate to never be able to find out the ending.

PinkFalcon do you enjoy torturing us? Just asking because you seem too, what with the whole leaving humongous cliffhangers on multiple fanfics and not finishing them. If you don't plan to, just tell us that and we'll flame you and move on. However, if you are planning to (which would make me and others EXTREMELY happy) then get on with it! Phantom and Adopted love are two of my fave fics... or they would be if you would finish them! PLLLLEEEEAAAASSSEEE! I'm begging you! If you don't the background will get depressing and I'll curl into a ball anime style. Hope you actually check your reviews now and then!

Such a wonderful fanfiction... Seriously I think I have never read another one's able to make my heart beat like this one.

It's clearly a masterpiece (I don't know if it's still "YOUR" masterpiece since your last addition to it was not what we can call recent and you've probably written plenty other things meanwhile).

But I hope you're still keeping an eye on this fic's reviews...

It's just wonderful how you were able to depict the characters and particularly their emotions and feelings. It's pretty rare to find someone with such a talent, even in regular literature.

So, since I've become kinda addicted to this story, I am obviously going to ask you the one question... Does this story have a continuation somewhere ? Maybe you just had a major writer block and couldn't find a way to finish it but since you said yourself it was your masterpiece, I wanted to ask anyway... During the last chapter, you didn't seem like a writer who doesn't know where he or she goes, quite the opposite in fact.

I don't know why I'm bothering you with that " I'm not even sure I want to know the rest of the story since the Phantom of the Opera (from which your story's inspiration is from I think)doesn't end very well for the Phantom "

I guess I just wanted to tell you how much your fic is wonderful for me !

I remember finding this story on The Pokemon Tower when I was a junior in high school. I thought it was one of the greatest fanfictions I had ever read, and I still believe that. To say I was upset when I found that work untouched with no updates for such a long time would have been an understatement.

Now here I am, a freshmen in college, and what do I happen to find while randomly browsing? Why, the very same story I have grwn such fondness for! And look, more chapters to read! I was so excited.

And then the final chapter.

I must ask, PinkFalcon, where is the crescendo of your odius opus? Where is the finale? I am dying to know if you have finished this story or not. You simply cannot leave old fans like myself just wondering the whole time! If it was completed else where, could you please tell me where?

You have actually been an inspiration for my fanfictions, my friend. I hope one day I'll have something as great as yours, and I hope that you reveal the conclusion to me and any other followers that you may have. I thank you for creating this wonderful masterpiece.

Until next time...

NIGHT SHADE

Wow, I've never been so touched by a story. This story is so amazing and I really hope you finish it, it is the best fanfiction I've ever read in my entire life. You are an an amazing writer.

god I HATE YOU!

I have been reading this non-stop, and you are just gonna not be bothered to even FINiSH it! :(

well, i'm never like this usually, and it takes a LOT to get me wound up, so i am BEGGING you, FINISH!

Or i might actually cry...

i've been rly intentive and listened and though, "What a brilliant story, one I'll never forget"

AND YOU'RE JUST GONNA LEAVE IT?

i'm sorry I am being insane but, I am so desperate to find out the ending!

OH PLEASE, PLEASE AND PLEASE...

FINISH! I'm REALLY COUNTING ON U...

AAML:(