amazing story, continue it please!

also a prequel would be great i would love to read it.

ending/!/I don,t enderstand.

this is the most amazing story ive read, i started it on The Pokemon Tower. I would love to find out the ending, and if you would write a prequel.

Being still sort of new at this, I don't really know what a review is. But just one thing to say: you write REALLY good, and wish you could continue writing your stories, especially this one.

Hey, remember me? I wrote you a really long PM awhile ago about how I hoped you finished this story someday, and I still hope that, but . . .

Well, I don't know if you ever WILL finish, but I wanted to let you know that someone on deviantART is trying to rip-off the story. :/ They aren't doing it very well - in fact, their version is rather awful - but it's clear what their intent is. At least, it is to me. I'll leave the link here, with appropriate spaces so that hopefully it shows up in the review, in case you want to take a look. Granted, I left a comment on their deviation as well, in hopes that maybe they'll take it down; chances are it'll just start a bunch of drama, though. Whatever.

Even so, if the deviation is gone when you check it out, you'll know why.

: / / waterlillysquiggles . deviantart art /The-Phantom-of-the-Pokemon-1-100440360

-Umi

I'm really glad to have read this again after such a long while. The latest chapter was amazing, and I'd forgotten how much I love this story. I do hope you will continue to write - I'd love to see the conclusion of this story after so long!

Thank you for finally writing a story with Pikachu as a main character (he talks (Pika speech, but still!)!), in addition to well developed characters and an intense plot. This has definitely brought me back into the fandom of Pokemon. I've always been devoted to the original season since I watched the first episode on TV as a little kid, and the first couple seasons following it, but the original kids - Ash, Misty, Brock, Pikachu - hold a special place in my heart. Thanks for writing this once again, and you're so close to the end! I hope you'll finish this!

- slstmaraudersjple

This fanfic is so amazing! I luv it! Plz rite de last chapter soon! I can't wait 2 read it! Gary sud fall off a cliff nd de headmasters sud all... Nm

That rudi is a backstabbing-Lieing- evil- wrench- betraying-unloyal- ugly- horrid- rich guy

poor ash how can misty be soo neive ugh its just a children story nd dont u tink he wud hav killed u already ugh how dumb can u get

great story though i cant stop reading it!

Hi,

I found your fic on someone's favourites and I can see why it was there. Just wow! It's a shame that it isn't quite finished but I'm keeping my hopes up. You are doing a fantastic job with this, it is enthralling and exciting.

Keep up the great work!

I am a lone little review that arrived in your inbox to remind you of all your fans out there. Rawr.

In proper English, PLEASE FINISH THE FIC! Its only one more chapter, remember?

Awaiting ending,

TheKaliflower

this story is absolutely wonderful! the characters, the setting, the plot, the writing style is all amazing. the pace is well written as well and is neither too fast, or too slow making it a wonderful and easy read. i really do enjoy how you have things set up, from rudi's involvement and sudden stuck position, to even lances small but enjoyable addition.

i really hope that you are planning to continue this story and finish it, because this has to be one of the few stories i've read and have to say, fully enjoyed reading.

Oh God. I know you haven't updated this since oh-eight, but I think I might scream if I don't get to read the end of this chunk of amazingness. D:

Your character development is ASTOUNDING. Truly amazing. Everybody has so many sides and so many creative twists that this seems more real to me than a lot of people I know in real LIFE. I just found this fic this morning, and LITERALLY stayed inside - all day - to finish what you've written so far. Jaw-dropping. It breaks my heart to read that you don't want to write a sequel for this, and if there is any chance that begging would change your mind I would do it in a heartbeat.

Of course, your plot is wonderful. But, I have to say, your characters are what really do it for me. I personally think that Ash is your best piece of work, but I'm sure you knew that without me telling you. :) I'm absolutely in love with him. And I think that, as a writer, just being able to continue working your craft with a character like his would be worth writing a sequel. But hey - that's just my opinion. ;)

Either way, I'd just like to remind you that you are wonderful. Just so you know. ;D

I know it has been over a year since this story has been updated, and despite similar gaps in the past I don't believe any were this long. Nevertheless I urge you to complete this story, it is refreshingly well-written and nearly completed to boot. I have really enjoyed re-reading it over the last few days and have been just as impressed with it as I was the first time I read it.

I just want to know how this story ends, and how our heroes fare.