|Reviews for Lose It All|
| toolazytologin chapter 1 . 1/13
I ... I can't ... I just CAN'T ...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH I'M SO DEPRESSED NOW!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
Wow that was pretty damn sad but also good I liked it
| royed lover chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
What the hell happened to you that made you write this?!
It was still a good story!
| Sensei-san chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
That was AWESOME!Like, the best fanfic ever! Way better than I could ever do, that's for sure.
| AlfredisMyHero chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
| Evil Pixies Are Yummy chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
AW! DX ROY! *sobs hysterically* ... gd fic
| Karaiina chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
BEAUTIFUL! i love this fic so much...simple but sweet..great job!
| VadMustang chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
great story..but...poor of my roy!...sniff...you have to do a sequel...you can't let roy die..! plzz! plz i'm begging you..! anyways i really love this story..!
| Twentysix26 chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
aw that was too sad! i wanna cry...
But i loved it anyhow!
| EquineAngel chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Hey sis! So, I decided to take a look at some of your FMA work, and it deffinatly up to the wonderful standards that I hold for yah! Heero or Duo, Ed or Roy... .:shakes head:. I dun know how you do it, sis! So, as a wonderful token of my .:cough cough:. procrastination .:cough cough:. love for your writing, I shall say, on with the review!
Hmm, sis... the beginning was a bit fast...but none the less well written. .:smirk:. I dun think that people are supposed to salute indoors unless they're reporting, though. A couple spelling errors, but thankfully so much better then the ones I was trying to read by other authors. :-p My my... I seemed to have settled on a nice RoyxEd section. I don't know whether to be annoyed with you for bringing this out...or thankful... Yanno...I was just surfing the FMA sections of FF, and just to see what twisted ideas people have in their minds...I looked up an EdxAl section...and it... has stories in it...O.O isn't that illegal? And... wouldn't that HURT? .
HAHA...I had a good laugh at the intro to the note that Roy left in his office. heh... just like him to call everyone subordinates... couldn't settle for "friends" fellow partners" or even a good "Yo, yall, what's hanging my homeslice?" still hanging onto those last dregs of a rank, eh?
Ah, but this was so sweet! Mustang died then, I suppose? .:sigh:. Must you insist on killing off ALL the good characters? Oh, haha...and an update for you for my progress... I have deemed Roy to be a "good character" now. I was so surprised he actually had a personality...I just had to dig a little farther into the episodes. BTW... nice song to go with this. I love the lyrics to this one... I'm not a huge fan of the BSB, but I do enjoy some of their work. It's fitting though...the song and how you tie in the lyrics. :-) I'll be reading your other fic sometime soon, I believe. Until then, you must bear with this sorry excuse for a review. :-p Just pretend it's loaded with good information, okay? . .:closes eyes and tries to pretend:.
Oh, and just one last thing before I go... (don't start cheering yet...I'm not gone!) I downloaded the second part of the movie... and nearly ripped my hair out in frustration. .:sigh:. Who ever came up with that idea is seriously a morbid person. o.O And kinda messed up too... who would want to kill Alphonse? That's depressing. :-( But then I realized...OMG! SIS! I'm in love with some guy who's possibly over 80 years old! Oh, man! Okay... so my history isn't that good... that IS about how old they would be here...isn't it? Ew... and Roy must be REALLY ugly in his old age... hmm... I wonder if her ever got a tan in those years? he could use it...
Well, I'm off then! Got hw to do and junk like that! Love you lots, sis, and keep up those grades in school, k?
| Yuki-o-Sanada chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
nice! beautiful!1 i love it! your fic is lovely! poor roy, i love it! i want more jeje
| kathleen chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
it made me cry! i love ed and roy oh so much and then brining up the death of maes! oh i wanted to hug them all and sit there and cry! this is really sad. maes i miss you! you were the coolest character in the show! you and your chick pajamas!this is a really good fanfic! good job!
| hittocerebattosai chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
aw... so sad... aww...
| Saku-Dae-Hex chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
Saku: Wow...I am at the verge of tears. Its just so...ugh, beautiful and sad and and...you know! What a wonderful fic!
| cm34 chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
such a beautiful masterpiece although death doesnt replace life i think anyone that really loves someone would do the same