Reviews for Wings
Blueangel367 chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Ha.. i liked it.. very Rai.. nice work xx
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Lovely.

The ending actually shocked me, hence the review.

Marvelous job.

-SKies
The Slytherin Golden Girl chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
That sounds about right for a butterfly, but um..was it Ren's or Rai's POV? I think it said it was an unsettling look about Rai. Right? It was good though so like don't think I'm saying it ain't or something. :)
InsecureLemon chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Very nice! Kind of subtly creepy. xD My review doesn't do it justice... Oh well. ._. I love the story, none the less.
Kitsy-chan chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
God, I love your one-shot! Such image-spoken words and desription inside it! I just had to read it more then once and I could just see the scene you had wrote in my head as I kept reading it. If I had to rate this from 1-10, I'd say that this story would be a 40!
Reading4soul chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Ouch! Well described, and it does fit, in a way, especially with Vol.3
avi17 chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Ooh, very good. Normally, I might gripe about the length, but this was much better short. I love the last line. Could this be a metaphoric butterfly?

~Avi-chan
Katarik chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
*meeps*

The butterfly reminds me of Ren. Was that deliberate?

*meeps again and hides from Rai*