Reviews for Close Your Eyes
Moon6Shadow chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Heart-breaking, I really like the ending it's the little things that make or break you after all.
Silver Sailor Ganymede chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
Very sad, a powerful piece of writing.
MilesTailsPrower-007 chapter 1 . 8/29/2006

I can see why you'f feel sad after this. I almost teared up. Poor Al. You did a nice job mentioning the lack of feeling and encorportating it into this. Beautiful job.
chibiazn3 chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
its...too...sad...sniff...poor ed...
Phoenix Hoshika chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
My goodness… That was sad, but well written; good job. Yes, that song does have a rather lonesome feeling to it. The heart put into it is evident and even though it's sad still makes it song you want to listen to over and over again, so I'm really not that surprised it inspired such a good piece of fan fiction. Keep up the good work.
LuckyLadybug chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
Wow. Very short, but it still manages to convey a lot of emotion. And it makes perfect sense that Al would have trouble getting used to his new form at first. I think you captured brilliantly what could have been his thoughts and feelings at that time in his life. The last lines are especially profound and sad.
Jezunya chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Wow. I only just discovered FMA, but this is a wonderful illustration of that terrible night in Ed & Al's childhood. Poor Al...
crazyanimefreak15 chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Ok...I'm kinda loss. Is this what happened right after they tried to bring thier mother back? It was well written, I'm just confused on the timeline.
K. A. Maples chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
*hugs Al and drags him home to feed him*

Scar: ... you know he can't eat...

Shut up.