Reviews for Survivors |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved re-reading this story. They are so good together. Hermione's timetable was fabulous as was the way you had them break the news of her pregnancy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this one for all of the clichés you listed at the end - both the ones you included and the ones you left out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks! It was a nice read! |
![]() ![]() Love it,wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was an amazing story in the way that it brings together a physically hurt and drained Snape and an emotionally hurt and drained Hermione. I think it makes the way they get together real; it’s a story of two people, healing together, and meeting each other through that process. The characterization is good; I love that, because you chose this premise, there was no need to chip anything off the way Snape treated Hermione or the way Hermione saw Snape; there is nothing but a determined Hermione and a weakened Snape at the beginning of the story. It feels so true and real. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() They are soooooo CUTE together! I like this fic a lot! Well done! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story! It had a lot of unexpected twists, which I enjoyed. Congrats on finishing your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally loved this. I've found that I like fics that include Severus in them; Harry and Hermione are my favorites with him, I don't know why. I found you stayed very close to character with both of them, and that's great, I really enjoyed reading them. Of course, I love smut, so I'm a bit disappointed that you didn't write any, but sometimes, the smut can ruin a story. In any case, you wrote a lovely fan fic, one that I'm favoriting, a story that did, indeed went from barely allies, to what they are now. Thank you so much for writing. Aonokioku |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story! Well-written and interesting. It had everything! Fantastic job - your skill and narrative control are evident! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very much enjoyed this story, I have never been a fan of jane eyre but that does not mean I didn't read it, I'm at a loss of words other then you made my day very enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "even so" l;ove this line also um wouldn't Snape have ...er problems due to his lungs and all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant - almost as brilliant as Snape and Hermione themselves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story and the one you did with Witehound. I completely agree with you regarding sex scenes. It has to be an Integral whole. All the best, Kitt |