Reviews for Mortal Enemies
cl chapter 2 . 8/29/2005
Love the repeat of history! Who is the new boy? An offspring of Drakken and Shego? Update soon.
09301lkj o809j chapter 2 . 8/29/2005
Hey really good story, but who is this boy that Lex meets? is it the son of some of kims old enemies like say drakan and shego or what? Upate NOW!
8798723987 chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
Ha! Love it! its cute!
Um chapter 2 . 8/29/2005
THis is a very good story...Update! Please!
Um chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
Really good so far, I like ur idea, its pretty interesting.
Inertia 2.0 chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
Let me get a few things straight, ok in your first chap Lex was 5 yrs. old, now she's 16 and Kim's other kids are twins, Kyle and Kaye, wait what does the Kaye stand for, and by the way...I repeat...WHY! That's all thanks, good chap, I hope the next one will be better and another thing...WHHY! good luck
userx chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
I know a good story when I see one..and this is definately a good story. Kim and Ron are very much in character and their children seems to have inherited some of their parents traits. Keep up the good work! I'm looking foward to reading the next chapter.
horseluver101 chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
That was great! You have to go on! I cant wait!
Ace Ian Combat chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
Kim sounded like her mom in A Sitch In Time when she said don't even joke about having twins. I must admit, I like this plot better so far.
Dillymac chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
You're basing the chapters on your last story, cool. I like that you gave a reason for the flying clock this time though, update soon.
I'm not evil. yet chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
Good side: That was good.

Evil side: You always say that, you goody two-shoes.

G.S.: Shut up.

E.S.: O... My gwood side's mwad at wittle ol' me...

G.S.: Anyway... as I was saying...

E.S.: Saying what? * G.S. slaps E.S., E.S. stays quiet*

G.S.: Better. Did you see the episode of Lilo and Stitch where Lilo meets Kim? Lilo meets everyone for some reason. She met american Dragon Jake Long, and celeberties, and...

E.S.: Well, gotta go now bye...

G.S.: Wait I'm not- *E.S. pushes submit review*
Riverfox237 chapter 2 . 8/28/2005
Lol, great update! Very cute. I can't wait to find out the connection to the title, "Mortal Enemies". Wait, Wade needed HELP w/ something? How bizarre. This outta be interesting! Excellent job, this is very well written! Please update soon, and keep up da great work!
Amaherst chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
great story so far update soon plz and thank you
Adrienne Y chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Wow, this such a cool story. And the way you wrote how Lex's talk. Well, I just have to say you have a skill for writing. Well, keep up the good work.
AtomX chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
WHAT! you couldn't finish the first version of your story... but it was so good (sob, sniff!) Well good luck with this one, oh by the way I have a few numbered questions I'd like you to answer.

's Lex's full name?

old exactly is she?

what gender will Ron Kim's baby be? (to tell you the truth I'd rather go for a girl).

You can answer these questions on your next chapter.

I hope you answer these questions because I like to keep track with the stories I read.
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