|Reviews for Mortal Enemies|
| AtomX chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
WHAT! you couldn't finish the first version of your story... but it was so good (sob, sniff!) Well good luck with this one, oh by the way I have a few numbered questions I'd like you to answer.
's Lex's full name?
old exactly is she?
what gender will Ron Kim's baby be? (to tell you the truth I'd rather go for a girl).
You can answer these questions on your next chapter.
I hope you answer these questions because I like to keep track with the stories I read.
| Dillymac chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Aw so cute. I like Lex better than Athena, it shows more emagination. Both versions are good, and was good, but I like this one better. Update soon.
| Riverfox237 chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Hm...this should be interesting! I didn't read the original one, so this'll be all new for me! Can't wait to see where this goes! please update soon, and keep up da great work!