Reviews for Just to Belong
xXxMartelxXx chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
I like this a lot. I, uh, sorry I have nothing better to say. :( But I really liked it. How Riddle didn't leave right away and instead stayed to make her suffer makes a twisted kind of sense.
Fenikkusu Ai chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Merope was truly a tragic figure-one that I actually pitied. (And, I'm not the type to pity any fictional character.) This fic does her justice.
The Enchanted Teakettle chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Great fic; I liked the insight into Merope's character! The writing style is fantastic!

~ TET
eromenosx chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Oh dear... i'm pretty sure i cried at the end. That is just.. so heart wrenching T_T
crazykittiecat chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
o wow... I don't have any words for this. struck me, did it. great
Tris-WannaBe chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
Very interesting perspective. I like it.
Miri Tiazan chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
God, what is there to say? You do disturbing better than anyone I know. This is good stuff. But ah. My reaction to this is best exprssed with onomatopoeia that does not translate well into phonetics. Kind of a horrified wailng sigh. But that's not right either. Well. Some things will just have to remain obscure. Anyway, well done.
DaggerQuill chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
That was really good, very original. its fun to read a story thats not at all about harry and hogwarts ect. but still about JKR's books
shazia Born confused chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
aw!

dunno what else to say, but that is soo... i dunno...sweet? sad?...

tc

:D
account chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
brilliant, very interesting piece!
UnSerious Sirius chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Eerie... wow. Really chilling. Actually, the character of Merope kind of intrigued me. I got the impression that if it weren't for her father and brother, and later on her husband, she might have made a powerful witch. Very nice, and haunting.
Nimbirosa chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
*dies* A/N, by the way. God and opalish indeed...

But I love the pwetty puwp-oh pwoze.

Pretty purple prose. *bats eyelashes at her* Ve-e-e-e-ery pretty.

The emotion in it is good, too, and you made good use of language, and uncapitalised italics.
ZPPig Satan chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
*sniff*

Poor Merope. She really just couldn't catch a break, could she?
mrmistoffelees chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Interesting.