|Reviews for How Can I Show|
| FMA4EVER chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
so sweet! loved it!
| BlackRose0441 chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Wow! . Great job on this. Muahahaha, it's so right! Kikyou is dead and should just go away forever. :3 Aen't I sweet?
| Andra-chan chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Nice job! Very sweet!
| ammeirs chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
It was cute I like it! She is dead! lol I like it!
| shady-character chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
hm I see that this is from Kagome to Inuyasha, but the poem itself doesn't seem very characteristic of Kagome for some reason.
That she is dead and doesn't care about you
see, that isn't something Kagome would think or say.
you might also want to put a "that" right before I in this line:
I don't want to go
otherwise it's a bit confusing.
| XAmiX chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Hey the poem was ok, i cant say anything bad about it cause i suck at poems myself so.. good luck and keep on writing!
| Hanako Horigome chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
it was pretty good. Espescially if it was off the top of your head.
| Saoirse Robinson chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Nice expression of feeling.
| Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
This was pretty good and sad
| Shippostail chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Wow. this is good D
keep up the good work