Reviews for How Can I Show
FMA4EVER chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
so sweet! loved it!

in Christ,

Andra-chan chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Nice job! Very sweet!


Yami Tenchi
ammeirs chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
It was cute I like it! She is dead! lol I like it!
shady-character chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
hm I see that this is from Kagome to Inuyasha, but the poem itself doesn't seem very characteristic of Kagome for some reason.

That she is dead and doesn't care about you

see, that isn't something Kagome would think or say.

you might also want to put a "that" right before I in this line:

I don't want to go

otherwise it's a bit confusing.
XAmiX chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Hey the poem was ok, i cant say anything bad about it cause i suck at poems myself so.. good luck and keep on writing!
Hanako Horigome chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
it was pretty good. Espescially if it was off the top of your head.
quirkyghostdelta chapter 1 . 8/21/2005

Nice expression of feeling.

Keep Writing,

Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
This was pretty good and sad
Shippostail chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Wow. this is good D

keep up the good work