Reviews for Daddy's Little Girl
Kitty1098 chapter 35 . 10/20/2015
You can do both, Write the story and separately write the sex scenes.
xxTaintedLullabyxx chapter 35 . 4/27/2011
i loved this story and I can't wait to read the sequel!
Lycan Empress chapter 4 . 11/9/2010
I dont disagree with this chapter as much as I do with the others
Lycan Empress chapter 3 . 11/9/2010
Should I even have to explain what's wrong with this chapter
Lycan Empress chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
Okay I dont believe Zhao would treat his daughter like that

True, Zhao is a cruel cruel man and yes he would be a strict parent but never to the point of senselessly beating his ten year old daughter

He would probably raise her like if she were a soldier not a punching bag

He'd probably form and mold her into being a prodigy firebender and a merciless fighter

She'd probably see him as an admiral not a father

And I dont care what you say if a girl was brought up like that she would probably be emotionless

At least Mai makes a sarcastic comment

If this girl were for real, she'd probably have an eternal expression like a marine or soldier in a line up; stoic, expressionless, calculating, and focused

She's would only speak unless directly spoken too

When she'd stand she'd stand like in a line up; straight up no slouching, hands behind her back, and face forward

And when she sites, the same thing back straight and face forward

Even for Zhao this was completely OOC and beyond

And I know I sound like I'm trying to take over the fanfiction and tell you how your character should be and trust me I hate it when I do this but it just goes to show how much I disagree with you

You want to be a good writer, dont over exaggerate
CaRzY chapter 33 . 3/9/2009
this story rimends me of the song "love story " by talory swith
avatarishot chapter 34 . 2/25/2009
wow that was like a rome and julet story it was so ramicto
heavy-metal-thunder chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
You're such a great writer! You should really write a romance novel! I'd buy it
O-OrhcpO-O chapter 35 . 1/20/2008
omg sso great and about that lemon scene i think yes ;]
O-OrhcpO-O chapter 29 . 1/20/2008
why do you call zula instear of azula nickname mabey? good chapter, too
O-OrhcpO-O chapter 26 . 1/20/2008
omg this chapter made me cry ur such a pasionate writing and wow this is a great story
RueBroadway chapter 35 . 10/15/2007
This story was cute. Towards the end it got kind of predictable. I think you made Zuko just a little too weak and your charachter a little too strong. There was no equilibrium between the two, and after the tenth time Leiko saved Zuko, the story became bit boring. You started your story really strong though.
SnowWhite0716 chapter 35 . 9/12/2007
OH MY GOSH THAT WAS SO AWESOME!
rocknrolla chapter 34 . 8/26/2006
I liked this story. Leiko is cool! Loved this lots! Zuko and Leiko is a cute pairing!
shampoo147 chapter 34 . 6/25/2006
Hello, I'm Kyla and i really like your work. it's very inclined and emotional, I like that. They got away, adn Zuko lived. YOu had a good job reveiwing hre emotions and ZUko's probability. Out of 1-10, I give it a 9. Great job. P.S. i did rad all of your chapters.
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