|Reviews for Daddy's Little Girl|
| Kitty1098 chapter 35 . 10/20/2015
You can do both, Write the story and separately write the sex scenes.
| xxTaintedLullabyxx chapter 35 . 4/27/2011
i loved this story and I can't wait to read the sequel!
| Lycan Empress chapter 4 . 11/9/2010
I dont disagree with this chapter as much as I do with the others
| Lycan Empress chapter 3 . 11/9/2010
Should I even have to explain what's wrong with this chapter
| Lycan Empress chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
Okay I dont believe Zhao would treat his daughter like that
True, Zhao is a cruel cruel man and yes he would be a strict parent but never to the point of senselessly beating his ten year old daughter
He would probably raise her like if she were a soldier not a punching bag
He'd probably form and mold her into being a prodigy firebender and a merciless fighter
She'd probably see him as an admiral not a father
And I dont care what you say if a girl was brought up like that she would probably be emotionless
At least Mai makes a sarcastic comment
If this girl were for real, she'd probably have an eternal expression like a marine or soldier in a line up; stoic, expressionless, calculating, and focused
She's would only speak unless directly spoken too
When she'd stand she'd stand like in a line up; straight up no slouching, hands behind her back, and face forward
And when she sites, the same thing back straight and face forward
Even for Zhao this was completely OOC and beyond
And I know I sound like I'm trying to take over the fanfiction and tell you how your character should be and trust me I hate it when I do this but it just goes to show how much I disagree with you
You want to be a good writer, dont over exaggerate
| CaRzY chapter 33 . 3/9/2009
this story rimends me of the song "love story " by talory swith
| avatarishot chapter 34 . 2/25/2009
wow that was like a rome and julet story it was so ramicto
| heavy-metal-thunder chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
You're such a great writer! You should really write a romance novel! I'd buy it
| O-OrhcpO-O chapter 35 . 1/20/2008
omg sso great and about that lemon scene i think yes ;]
| O-OrhcpO-O chapter 29 . 1/20/2008
why do you call zula instear of azula nickname mabey? good chapter, too
| O-OrhcpO-O chapter 26 . 1/20/2008
omg this chapter made me cry ur such a pasionate writing and wow this is a great story
| RueBroadway chapter 35 . 10/15/2007
This story was cute. Towards the end it got kind of predictable. I think you made Zuko just a little too weak and your charachter a little too strong. There was no equilibrium between the two, and after the tenth time Leiko saved Zuko, the story became bit boring. You started your story really strong though.
| SnowWhite0716 chapter 35 . 9/12/2007
OH MY GOSH THAT WAS SO AWESOME!
| rocknrolla chapter 34 . 8/26/2006
I liked this story. Leiko is cool! Loved this lots! Zuko and Leiko is a cute pairing!
| shampoo147 chapter 34 . 6/25/2006
Hello, I'm Kyla and i really like your work. it's very inclined and emotional, I like that. They got away, adn Zuko lived. YOu had a good job reveiwing hre emotions and ZUko's probability. Out of 1-10, I give it a 9. Great job. P.S. i did rad all of your chapters.