Reviews for Choices |
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U chapter 2 . 10/15 It's was so frustrating to read this , that's why I come back again and again to get frustrated, lol To the "The Author " I hope it's really is you . Please continue and finish it. If not then put it in A03 and see response. |
King Loki chapter 1 . 7/31 I would be very interested in reading more if you come back to writing this or other Ranma 1/2 fics. You have great talent as a writer. |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/1 This story doesn't age all that well. At it's core it's a story of should a child victim of rape birth her rapists baby. |
The Author chapter 1 . 6/17 Hi! So-well, I'll be honest, for the past decade or so, I kind of forgot that I'd posted this story here. I was so invested in Ranma (and this story) once upon a time, but things change, life moves on, etc and I can't even remember the last time I watched and/or read the manga or anime. But it's amazing to come back here and find so many reviews, by people who seemed genuinely invested in this story I wrote and so I guess my question is - is there still, so many years later, any interest in me finishing the story? Ranma's not as popular as it once once; has it's time come and gone and along wth it, this story? I'm not entirely sure I even could - I'd have to dig out my old story outlines, and see if I can even write this kind of fanfiction anymore. Staying true to the 'voice' of the characters would be a challenge. But if there's demand, it might be something to try... |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2023 "I didn't want to! What could I do!" "Ignore him! Walk away!" "What?" Ranma cried. "Are you stupid? You didn't hear. . . ." "What did you call me?" Akane yelled. "Oh, so you listen to me _now_, huh?" She yelled back. "Stupid tomboy!" "You jerk!" she screamed . what a double epic. |
irispapyrus chapter 7 . 6/17/2022 I like this story a lot but holy crap are Ryoga and Akane out of character. Like sooo out of character. To point you kinda morphed them both to genuinely evil characters which I don’t think was your intention. |
U chapter 7 . 10/21/2020 ...W...T...F. Why is Akane getting so much showtime and being treated as a 'victim'!? Good lord...as for Ranma, is he a total masochist? The slightest word of "Oh, I only 'mostly' hate you!" from the girl and he quietly crawls back? Why is Ranma being torn into so much? He should stand up for himself and take a stand on his own two feet! Where is the resolve!? "Oh, he betrayed me by squeezing my wrist after I punched him in the face and grabbed him! He must be a monster, since he did that to a female!" Pfff...Double standards are really screwed up! As for the rape thing...eh... Anyway, well written story' but really am disliking the emotional-devestation plot-focus and the apparent railroading back to an abusive relationship with Akane. Ranma deserves better, but maybe I'm just a fan of happy endings... That...is a really f'ed up situation for Ranma. Akane was a totally evil monster to him and 'he' is painted as the bad-guy by everyone. The girl is expected to punch him in the face and scream at him constantly, but if the guy raises his voice or forces her hand off him? Worst double-standard around and sadly seen in reality. Then Ranma is unknowingly 'RAPED' and Akane 'KNOWS' it and doesn't say a word, while STILL pretending Ranma is evil? Everyone at the school is taking her bull account as gospel? That heartless, vile, evil little monster! Why in the name of all that is holy, is Ranma so hung up on the girl?! Gah! I hope the next chapters go in a more positive direction for him. Akane deserves to BURN |
U chapter 7 . 10/21/2020 It's all Fucking shit ..no one give damn about ranna ,no one fucking care about ranna ,, it's all shit ... reading it's just frustrations, it's not worth reading it. It's all shit .. |
James423 chapter 6 . 8/9/2019 You could've at least wrote one more chapter to get rid of the cliffhanger. |
James423 chapter 2 . 6/10/2019 I enjoyed the story a lot. However it would've been better if you remained consistent and used female pronouns everytime Ranma was a girl. |
crusincloud chapter 7 . 12/31/2017 Okay what. Years later and i still want to kniw what ranmas decision is.. |
Shyguy1 chapter 7 . 9/25/2017 This is a good story. Well written. The best word I could use to describe it would be "intense". I saw a review of it that described the characterization as "less and more" and I can't help but agree. I think, you've boiled these characters down. Cut away the detritus and come to the center of them. I'm anxious to see the rest. You created such a life like patch work of characters and events that I find I am emotionally invested in the outcome. Despite it being fiction, i know that I will feel a profound sense of relief at least at getting closure. To those who are thinking of reading this, be warned. It it's a fantastic work and must be read to the end to be fully understood. No half measures. |
Ro0w'z chapter 4 . 9/19/2017 A estas alturas de la historia ( me gustaron mucho los primeros capítulos) pues la historia es muy repetitiva, dices la misma información en varios párrafos con diferentes palabras, y a la larga es muy frustrante y Ranma cambia de opinión y vuelve a la original en todas estas cosas que describes que ea abrumador ... Tenia que decirlo |
Ro0w'z chapter 1 . 9/18/2017 Oh my gosh, esto es s bueno muy muy bueno! |
Moonstone Spoon chapter 7 . 2/16/2017 What a shame this was never completed. |