|Reviews for Part the First|
| Inertia321 chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Amazing sotry! Seriously, really really good. If you're wondering why you're not getting a lot of reviews (because you really deserve them!) just go to the reviews link in your account, then go to annonymous and then click enable, so you can get annonymous reviews, as well as user reviews. I really hope you continue soon!
| Sarah LoTuS chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
nice start! I look forward to the next part.
I somethimes find posting in chapters to helpful to the muse-just a bit of pressure, you know ;)