Reviews for Twist of Fate
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12
God the frivolous and strangely romanized Japanese was trying on my patience.
kitanalao chapter 20 . 7/28/2014
nice progress... so far i noticed you didn't use atarashi kotoba anymore since chapter 16 if i am not mistaken that fine i guess... but i suggesting you to previous your earlier and fix your mistake in japanese vocabullary because if japanese people read it. they will feel insult because you change their native language... of course i hope that not happen to you. oh yeah.i have to stop for now... but i'll be back again when you are update. so see you...
kitanalao chapter 19 . 7/28/2014
hmm... nice continuation good job in plot.
kitanalao chapter 18 . 7/28/2014
soundlike a plan. nice job...for this chapter...
kitanalao chapter 17 . 7/28/2014
hello again. i am back again... waw... hmm... nice continuation but i still found error in japanese vocabullary...
nequam-tenshi chapter 21 . 7/16/2014
An amazing chapter. I could feel that anger Akari had when she saw Kumiko with her key chain! I am surprised at Hikaru being the more mature one, but him being mature fits in this situation.
GameOfAlex1307 chapter 21 . 7/15/2014
Years ago, this was the first Fanfiction that I had ever read and was the story to initially get me into writing fanfics all those years ago. When I got the email that you updated, I screamed and nearly burst into tears. I was so happy that I re-read the entire story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I NEED THIS STORY IN MY LIFE! Keep up the wonderful work!
ChildlikeEmpress chapter 21 . 7/15/2014
It made me smile to see your update! Thank you for continuing to write this story. :)
RIA24 chapter 21 . 7/14/2014
Thank you for updating. (:
Thundercat chapter 20 . 5/7/2014
Pretty good. Why not have Touya play a teaching game of GO with Akari? That crazy bully girl could "walk in" and see them playing. Maybe then she will realize that Touya is out of her league when she can't even grasp the basics of GO but Akari can!
kitanalao chapter 15 . 4/2/2014
hmm... so far you did good job... you did improve especially in japanese vocabullary (atarashi kotoba) well... congratulation... however i have to stop now due to other story... but i'll be back. so see you...
kitanalao chapter 14 . 4/2/2014
hahaha... yeah touya will not be happy with this...
kitanalao chapter 13 . 4/2/2014
umm... nice chapter... good progress...
kitanalao chapter 12 . 4/1/2014
nice progress... eventhough i still notice your mistake and japanese vocabulary... i suggest you becarefull or japanese reader here would be insulted because you changed their language..
kitanalao chapter 11 . 3/28/2014
hello again... i know it's been awhile. i know... well. usually i only need a day to reread 10 chapter. but now i have network problem so sorry...
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