|Reviews for Revelation|
| onetreefan chapter 22 . 3/23/2006
wow. that was amazing. that was such a good story. poor lex! actually, poor dead chloe! this was awesome. im looking foward to the epilogue! it should be good. great writing!
| The Die Hard chapter 20 . 1/31/2006
A good rousing adventure all around, well written and smooth storytelling, elements of both the comic resurrection via clone of Lex and the Lois&Clark TV show of same in the cyborg Lionel. But as an android/cyborg, shouldn't he have been way too tough for Lex to beat up? Even if not to the range of the robot (and trust a metallurgist on this, aluminum is a way better choice for a pseudo-skeleton than titanium - the only time you'd use a titalloy is if you're planning on exploring Jupiter), the artificial body should neither bleed, nor feel pain. As for Lex's usual stupidity, can't much fault you for that, since he regularly does the same stupid thing on SV, but anyone who crossed Bill Gates, for example, would find themselves facing a team of combat special forces, not a guy with a head wound and his reporter girlfriend. (The best thing about Stargate is that when military action is called for, they don't stint on the correct military action.) Hm. And how much did Lex know about the bomb (which I'm supposing was intended to destroy incriminating evidence, which it failed to do if the room wasn't completely collapsed, and it wouldn't take Sherlock Holmes or Gregory House to figure something screwy was going on), and the liquid kryptonite? Methinks another chapter is called for...
| DoomsdaySquirrel chapter 18 . 12/23/2005
GREAT UPDATE! I can't wait till that bomb goes off, Clark gets his powers back, and kicks some ass. Oh, and when he was listing Clark's powers and asking if he covered everything...I wish Clark would've told him something along the lines of "no, I can fly too, asshole". Ah...dreams.
| Nadz chapter 18 . 12/23/2005
wow that was a great chapter! plaese continue soon!
| xxxNadzxxx chapter 17 . 12/18/2005
great great start! italics arnt working though! great story, great chapter cliffhangar! plaese continue soon!
| DoomsdaySquirrel chapter 17 . 12/15/2005
This story is awesome. Sorry I didn't get around to reading it sooner so I could post multiple reviews. Awesome, awesome, awesome. I love your characterizations. Not one thing seems out of character. It's a nice change of pace compared to a lot of fanfic. Everything seems completely in character to the show. The dynamics in all the various relationships are spot on. Maybe sometime in the future, perhaps in a sequel, the Chlark might develop? My only criticism has nothing to do with your writing style. A bomb that senses a difference in air density according to Clark's mass? What if someone opens a door or window...and what if more people are in the room beyond Clark (like there are)? But hey, that's nitpicking. ;) One of the best stories I've read in a long time. Can't wait for an update!
| DarkIceMuggle chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
So I'm reading this story forever till I catch up, and I have to say...WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER?
I love the idea, and the fic, and I hope to see more soon.
| mannah87 chapter 14 . 11/16/2005
very cool story! i can't wait to read more!
| terr chapter 5 . 9/8/2005
I read this story the first time you posted, it was fantastic. I'm sorry I didn't tell you so the first time. :]
| SnowLeopard7 chapter 5 . 9/7/2005
This is a fascinating story so far. I hope we will find out the whole truth of what destroyed Lex and Clark's friendship. Keep up the good work.
| Joseph Benjamin chapter 2 . 8/25/2005
Interesting turn of events. Looking forward to where you take this story.