Reviews for Broken wings and Shattered Things
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 12 . 10/28/2009
Lmfao. Pretty good lemon. Some parts made me laugh though. XDD Wonderful job!

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 11 . 10/28/2009
Lols. I liked your comment at the end.. but no.. I wait for the best part at the end. XD Great twist on the plot. )

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 10 . 10/28/2009
Gyah! Wake up Mahiru!

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 9 . 10/28/2009
Nice. O

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 8 . 10/28/2009
*_* Woah what.. OOC XD

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 7 . 10/28/2009
O! Mahiru!

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 6 . 10/28/2009
Lols. I love it! XD

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 5 . 10/28/2009
Aw... Mahiru! thta was very sweet at the end. )

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 4 . 10/28/2009
Lmfao. Pup tent? XD I've never heard of that one. XD

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 3 . 10/28/2009
Lols. Yay for talking to yourself. xD

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
Lawls.. Yes, Mahiru just cursed. XD

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Pretty good so far! I'm not very fond of second pov but great job none the less. xD

Ari chan
sprees4life chapter 12 . 5/7/2008
hey/ this was great... more please.
LittleLadyHal chapter 12 . 1/12/2008
Oh that was hot! I love it!
MoonPrincess623 chapter 12 . 7/10/2007
If this was ur frist the the rest will be even better. I loved it, this was a really awesome story. But i am wondering sinceu never said it was complete or not. If ti sin't I want more.
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