|Reviews for Sweet & Sour Pork|
| quakerMc.duck chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
i didn't like mimori point of view because it was way too fluffy and too much dialogue, ryuho fantasy was much better because it was wild with less talking and zero mushy gushy fluffy cotton candy sweet as caramel apple stuff.
| Senorita Lucha 777 chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
I read this fic, and I got to say, this is SO going into my favorite stories!
It made me horny somewhat!
Keep up the wonderful work!
| anonymous chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
It's a good think I wasn't wearing any draws today... Tis good. way too good. A girl like me can't handle it!
| SachikoHitsugaya chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Holy hell monkeys from the planet Azzoroth! (don't ask i'm really random...) That was pwnsome! It was really really really good... I don't know which one I liked more... they were both too awesome! I can't believe this is your first M-rated story. I believe that these types of stories are your forte. Keep up the good work!
xoxo (ok maybe not the x's)
| Eliannora chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
“Before we leave this closet you will beg me to be inside of you.”
The most priceless line as of yet. I just want him to rape her hardcore ;o
[not really rape, figure of speech around here. Simply indicating ... I don't know how to explain it. Forceful, surprised wanted sex? o-o ]
And during the closet scene, I was almost half hoping that someone would walk in ;3 oh ho ho ho ~
I don't need to change my drawers, is that bad? ;o This story gave me the same reaction as the first one I read did. They were both simply amazing. Is there any chance you'll come up with a new lovely plot to grace us with?
I think I've also figured out your mastery of lemons and words; freaking masters degree ;3
Please write soon again!
| Catastrophic Monsoon chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
omg... lol NICE!
| Kanamelover chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
OH SO... THEY WERE BOTH DREAMING THAT? WOW IT WAS REALLY GOOD!
| TheQuietMachine chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
Wow! that was really good! i'm jealous of your talent. I have no talent for writing lemons what so ever. It was good, but the POV switching after a long block got a little confusing cuz you forget where the other left off. All in all, very good!
| Yaoi-Freak1990 chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Awesome! I loved it!
| LivingRain chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
This is one of my favorite lemons to read. I've read it tons of times before, but now that I have an account, I'd like to comment.
#1) I love this fic with my entire being. It's amazing and it deserves an award. Yay!
#2) It's well written and I love the contrast of a woman's fantasy and a male's.
#3) This is my favorite pairing for this anime, so woot-ness!
I love your writing. Keep it up! -cheers-
| Kyo12591 chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
wow...my names kyo am ori 16 and shimatta...that was ..awsome...damn that was so...wow..your great at that...I'm serous..?I'm a hintai ...i'm sorry but..i am..koi..you are so good at that do you know japansese?...kokuhayo-suru...wow..watashi ..wow...goman...demo...watashi have to go...( damn wow...i...wow..sorry but i have to go)...that bwwas serously awsome though write more!
| aerial-delusion chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
I LOVED IT! Youre amazing!
| ChinkYxXx186 chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
OmaiGawd...great story..i loved how it kept the reader goin..haha..well me of course...But i liked ur idea of how you would show both of there sides...most pl would show it frm one point of veiw...great first tyme...have more?lol
| redstar96744 chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
what an original and inventive way of writing a fic. Very well written in character and detail. To be able to write 2 pov's simutaneously and keep the story flowing without giving in to the temptation to hurry one scene along before the other is talent. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this (3x's) before I realized that yes, I absolutely need to change more than just my a great way to test(and pass) your way into becoming a terrific "M" author. WOW!
| tierra diosa chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
damn i need to change more than my underwear try my shorts too!