Reviews for Burning Heart
anon chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
I don't quite get the rhythm of the verses,

how they flow and fluctuate.

Perhaps it's just me.

But you might want to write it out

in the rhythm of the words

as they came through your mind

and onto the clean, white paper.

You might want to write it

as you would read it aloud.
Kaledena chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
o I like that _ Good job! _ Oh.. and in my fic it's Antoinette Giry, not Megg! Sorryi haven't answered that... .
Shadows Run chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
OUch, that last line was a killer... All his promises don't mean much when there isn't anyone to keep them for. Good poetry without being too angsty.