Reviews for Heart of a Dragon
dragongirl2101 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
it could use a little more detail here or there but all around a great story! it was kind of sad at times but of course because its a sad story but i liked the ending! great job :)
iamamywaterhouse chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Really like this fic. I found the Albus-Hermione interaction very emotive. Keep it up!
bluebelllane chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
i really liked the story, though the plot was good, but i have to say, and i mean this as contructive critisism, i think that the way you wrote it was a bit stiff, some of the grammar makes it a bit odd to read, and the speach is a bit stilted, i think you've got the makings of a good story here, but maybe if you spent a bit more time over it, and maybe even got a beta writer to help out a bit, i think it'd help you aswell as a writer, but like i said, i enjoyed the story and plot, just think it needs a bit of reviewing and expansion in some parts ie, you sepnt a lot of time on the introduction area, and then rushed the ending a bit in my opinion a beta

hope you don't take any offense though
Book Mad TJ chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Nice!
amortentiaaa chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Interesting names haha. I like the title. :)
Lissie chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
I must admit... Some severe ADD. And this happened, and that happened..Dumbledore just appeared outta nowhere? Sorry to say, but I didn't like anything but the end. Ahh well. Beggers can't be choosers:) You are a good writer though, you just need to learn how to properly.
brooke-ella1990 chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
aw, cute ending. i really liked it.
go.suck.on.a.lemon chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
Not too shabby, the bit with Dumbledore was a tad odd, but really it's a good fic, props.
JerseyAlps chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
This is the best fragment story I think I've ever read. Don't listen to your other reviewers who told this sucked. They suck for not having the balls to use their "Signature". Anyways that was truely a good and happy ending for such a depressing story. Good Job. -JerseyAlps
J.K. Rowling chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
I have to agree with the A.D.D. guy. I've never read anything worse. Don't quit your day job.
nibbles21 chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
What a sweet ending! Aw is all I can say!
q.thews chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Tis story goes quite well with the idea of a carnage that will be HP7 that i have :-(

Well written, with a great Dumbledore :-)

Bye
Another Charlie Fan chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Uhm...I don't think I've ever read as many sentences beginning with "And" in my life. And I mean it...
kizkool chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
really really really good!

Aw very sweet!
hpbookwormliz chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
Good story! I really liked it! :)

-Lizzie
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