Reviews for Together Forever
melpomene-muse of tragedy chapter 20 . 1/21/2006
Aw I'm a sucker for happy endings:D
melpomene-muse of tragedy chapter 19 . 1/21/2006
I tried to review this last night but my comp locked up. Nice chapter, I love the way you write Sheppard
melpomene-muse of tragedy chapter 18 . 1/21/2006
action chapter. There's a lot of rage going on here.
melpomene-muse of tragedy chapter 17 . 1/21/2006
I can so see nervous Shep. I hate cliffhangers! moving on...
melpomene-muse of tragedy chapter 16 . 1/21/2006
Long live Halling:)
angw chapter 20 . 1/3/2006
I agree a glimpse into the future would be good. Great story... :D
angw chapter 19 . 1/3/2006
Phew no blood shed. All safe and sound :D
angw chapter 17 . 1/3/2006
Oh no. That was completely unexpected. Who is the babynapper? :D
angw chapter 13 . 1/3/2006
I love the start...hehehe Elizabeth getting the drop on Ronon. I like the way you have written this game who knew Elizabeth was a deadly with an air gun :D
PentagonMerlin chapter 20 . 12/29/2005
While I must admit that if you were to stop now, it would be a mighty good place, I also have to admit that I love this story for you to quit.

As for story ideas, how about the twins first time on Earth (later on in their lives of course) and meeting their human grandparents. Just a thought.
Lisa chapter 20 . 12/17/2005
I love this story. As for another plot idea, you could jump foward a couple of years and continue with their life then.
melpomene-muse of tragedy chapter 14 . 12/16/2005
angst. Yup, that's definately angsty vibrations here. Well done.
melpomene-muse of tragedy chapter 13 . 12/16/2005
Oh so... Weir is evil...got it. I always figured she had it in her somewhere... Poor Teyla. A pregnant woman with a sprained ankle. Ouch.
melpomene-muse of tragedy chapter 12 . 12/16/2005
Dang your funny! Radek evil
melpomene-muse of tragedy chapter 11 . 12/15/2005
I thought the chapter was funny but the mental image of Zelenka as a ninja totally cracked me up!
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