Reviews for Persistence of Memory
Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Aw. Just...aw. Especially that last paragraph.
Yuna141 chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Love the Dali reference in the title :P I'm not sure if I'm just imagining it, but the link between the painting and Ed's watch sure is cool.

Favorite line:

"I guess somewhere along the way I grew up on me too."

I think all of us can relate in one way or another. One day you're thirteen years old and you're thinking that eighteen is ancient, and then life blindsides you and you wake up to discover that suddenly you're an adult.

One tiny nitpick - the last line seems a little too wordy. I'd take off the "so I can enjoy what I've regained", just for stylistic purposes. Most of the previous writing is very concise, and the clunkiness of the last sentence throws it off a little.

Thanks for the great read!
Goddess of Yesterday chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
Hey Wes, cute story I agree w/u on the Win/Ed combo!

Luv Lots,

Goddess of Yesterday
Sull89 chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
That was really good, I like it! I love how you phrase things, it works so well.

~Sull
Henrika chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
Very nice introspective piece. Even threw in some nice Ed/Winry. Nice work. Keep writing!
Barbara Akers chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
This is one of those pieces I didn't want to end. I could hear Ed's voice throughout it. Good job!
vegiegurl-too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
Aw...I love FMA, and you did a great job with Al and Winry. Love it.
Eva-AngelK chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
its cool, one of the prettier things I read... short... but so touching... I really do like it...

congratulations, your writing is completly cool and kind...

n.n YAY

Eva